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My Constant Desire

My thoughts are turning again to love, Waiting for what I've dreamed of Who will he be, do I even dare think, For love is an intoxicating drink I do so crave a romantic man, One who loves with all that he can Someone who has a kind loving heart, Who'll never want us to part I truly believe with everything in me, That's how love is supposed to be This constant desire is driving me mad, And some days makes me feel so sad I know love is out there for me, Please come and end my misery

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Jan Harvey

Date: 6/25/2009 1:53:00 PM

A good heart will find another in time. Until then the outcome will surely be worth the wait. Great poem! Thanks, Jan Harvey

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/7/2009 10:07:00 AM

very intimate verse of love and lament, God Bless You! James

James Fraser

Date: 6/5/2009 4:14:00 PM

Janice, what a gorgeous poem, lovely worded and wanting>James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/4/2009 10:16:00 PM

Janice, it is hard to find a romantic man, but when we do, we should try to hold on! I hope true love enters your life soon. You deserve it! Love, Carolyn

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/1/2009 5:13:00 AM

Awesome expression here. The reader feels your longing so strongly. Dreams do come true. Hang in. Love, Shar

Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/31/2009 2:19:00 PM

Strong words, thick chords @.@ I like this kind of poetry, the one that emerges in magma-paper squeares; thanks for sharing this =D

Saika F.

Date: 5/31/2009 11:42:00 AM

Its so wistful and expressive...love it-sayeeka

Stefania Carmen Misaila

Date: 5/31/2009 11:09:00 AM

we all feel like this and want to believe that true love really exists out there.. but it's so hard to hold on when reality punches you in the face. keep hanging on to your dreams, i know i am. lovely write. love, stephanie