My Comet Comes Near Again -

I was attracted to her troubles, her artful exits,
her love was terrible, she hurt me in all the right ways,
hides behind the tall tree of my inspiration
whistling like a playful truth easy to please & difficult to release,
says goodbye kindly & curiously as a dream departing under duress,
just when you thought she'd tell you the password to Heaven
she would scamper away as shewolf suspicious of where she lay
or prowling on the scent of prey,
I fell in love with how she fought mistrust and 'bad odds'
teaching me that patience often rests on hurtful wisdom,
but when this woman chooses to gallop into the gallery of my growth
wild and willfully, I quickly comprehend a true friend,
promises and time need not be bartered for
since emotions and experience are the blessings of our bond,
as my Poet Girl grows stronger, sings louder, strides prouder
I ponder happily that the only timepiece the Cosmos holds
is the connection of beating hearts, the affection of unjudging reception,
and now, above the melee of my routine I see her blazing towards me again
not falling near, rather raising me to that innocent & infallible trail
where tears become diamonds & frigidity faints in the arms of faith,
her love is no longer so terrible, more so terrific as temptation,
however, she continues to sharpen her blade on the bone of my breastplate,
and I resist not the mercy of her dangerous kiss  -

J.A.B.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Empress Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 12:02 AM
Dear Justin, As always you have a way with expressing and phrasing your thoughts with such romanticized metaphors that would reach the soul of the recipient in the most passionate manner, your love for your woman, and the one that you admire has been so well articulated here. I can feel the sincerity of thoughts and how poetic is the way you write! The ending is soul stirring! And i love also how youv written "her love is no longer so terrible, more so terrific as temptation," the assonance ans alliterations there truly blew me away! Theres an intense yet soft attraction which you would refer to as fresh here! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always! Thank you for supporting me
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April 2, 2025 at 1:38 PM
I don't think that I could understand love without poetry, for that matter, I don't believe I'd understand poetry without love...I thank you for loving my work Poetess...Justin
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 2:26 PM
Oh! I've come again to read this poem....I see from reading the comments the inspiration behind this piece. Fascinating...Very special.
Bordner Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 8:18 PM
She's the most special woman in the world. I've always loved how deeply you get into my poetry Elieen...J.A.B.
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July 11, 2014 at 3:01 PM
What a poem...wow!! it took a hold on me and would not let go:)-Love Ettie(ps. Im rating this a seven bc it is just that good and faving you as a poet lolz:)
Bordner Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 8:14 PM
My Poet Girl is a special danger, a pretty warrior. Ettie you do this love a great justice with the 7, and FAVING me is a fine inspiration, thank you!
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March 27, 2014 at 4:41 PM
patience often rests on hurtful wisdom.... :) awesome write.. :)==olive :)
Bordner Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 12:26 AM
Yes, the wisdom of believin in the best outcome. She raises me to that innocent and infallible trail. Thanks Olive for feelin the warm wisdom in this write. J.A.B.
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January 22, 2014 at 9:16 AM
Yes,, what a wow Poem... I like how you analyzed the wings of this poet girl... Linda
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January 22, 2014 at 1:16 PM
I love how I need to my Sphinx, The 3rd line from the bottom is my favorite. J.A.B.
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October 26, 2013 at 2:44 PM
Justin, hi how are you? I don't know why but, i love this one so much.. I as a poet sharpen my blade, and face all odds... This is a lovely dedicated poem, for our lovely JAY, I imagine... She sure is a mystery... You have so many poetess adoring your brilliant mind... Your ending line falls like a falling star, right into the heart of the unknown.... Justin if you ever are on line, would you stop by my latest, and of course a poem I wrote for yours trully Jaylovelss... ..I'll be back with a link .. the link is a poem I wrote for her 3 years ago. At one time her name was RAIN''' or something like that....lol .... Always LINDA
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October 28, 2013 at 5:30 PM
Your work is an ongoing education, and thrill Linda - I'll be sure to re-read the 'blue bird' - the two of you are so strange & lovely, like sirens - I love women; shrewd vicious and sexy, not many creatures around like that - few things in this world warm my blood like when I am capable of creating via the inspiration of women and thereby stimulating them in return my Sphinx - Jay is very special -
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October 26, 2013 at 2:56 PM
Okay, i sropped by to grab the link,,, on my "LITTLE BLUE BIRD OF RAIN" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=216589 ...... i noticed you read it already... However, Justin, hope to see you around soon...xox~ LINDA
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October 26, 2013 at 2:56 PM
typo stopped
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October 19, 2013 at 1:28 PM
Holy smokes, Justin....this enchanting seductress holds quite a power over you. A shewolf with the password to heaven, prowling on the scent of prey. Every line superb and rich, especially the ending :)
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October 20, 2013 at 2:11 PM
More like a power with me Karen - I work very diligently not to accept my inspirations as 'free' or for granted - just doing my best to consolidate my partnership with the ancient energy of the Cosmos - seductress is a beautiful term - thanks for everything Karen - J.A.B. %
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October 14, 2013 at 1:59 PM
:)) Beautiful and captivating. I believe I shall read it over and over and over again <3
Bordner Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 2:17 PM
Your sentiment is appropriate Jay, considering that this inspiration is your domain - thank you - pretty avatar - J.A.B. %
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October 14, 2013 at 11:31 AM
A classical poem this Justin, amazing love it...
Bordner Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 1:51 PM
Classic in truth Harry - enchantment is enriching - thanks my friend - J.A.B. %
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October 13, 2013 at 5:23 PM
Exciting one, Justin. I'm glad you treasure her, whoever she may be, wherever in space she roams. She must treasure you the same. :) It's refreshing to read and leaves one bedazzled after reading. The last two lines particularly blew me away. Fantastical composition. I know of nothing less in your writing. Always, Laura
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October 14, 2013 at 1:49 PM
Thanks for being so beautiful and stimulating Laura - She is a real mystery, a true danger in all the right ways - J.A.B. %
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October 9, 2013 at 2:47 PM
Wow!!!! Absolutely enthralling!!!! Magnificent!
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October 10, 2013 at 2:13 PM
Super glad to know I got your heart tickled Eileen - there are some amazing women in my life - J.A.B. %
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