Red Fiery Poet Free verse

My Color

You captured my heart ,
the essence of my charm
the depth of my mind
You are an artist!

Nature is enamoured
Black or white 
You give them dimensions. 
You are an artist!
        
If I ever become your inspiration
 let me  not sleep in your thoughts
Paint me with all the colours  
You have 
My color is red!
...the color of your heart ...

22.9.13 @ 3.06 am

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Richard Lamoureux June 11, 2016 at 8:29 AM It seems I am drawn back to this one once again. Have a great weekend.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis March 19, 2016 at 6:13 PM Light and airy creation of love.

John-Ovan.P. Hull March 12, 2016 at 10:11 AM Love and Insomnia are great ingredients for writing, you cooked up something tasty here.

Richard Lamoureux February 28, 2016 at 8:46 AM I enjoyed reading this one again. Red Fiery February 28, 2016 at 8:48 AM Thank you Richard:)I love to see your comments. ..

Richard Lamoureux September 27, 2013 at 6:44 PM Hi Red, Thanks for the visits and comments. Not much time today but I did want to say Hello

Harry Horsman September 27, 2013 at 10:38 AM One sad aspect of not being able to have time to spend here as i once had,, is i miss so many wonderful poem, and poets such as you Red, this is lovely.... Red Fiery September 27, 2013 at 11:03 AM Harry you are a wonderful poet too and i missed ur visit...glad that u finally arrived..!

Nette Onclaud September 24, 2013 at 11:40 AM maybe you can write about yellow someday.. love that color, and orange too!

Nette Onclaud September 24, 2013 at 11:39 AM heartwarming with hues that are etched on the canvas of love, red... splendid!..:)

Richard Lamoureux September 23, 2013 at 7:36 PM Perfect! 7 for sure.

Liam Mcdaid September 23, 2013 at 3:33 AM THATS MY COLOUR HA HA IT IS MY FAVORITE BEAUTIFUL PIECE

Richard Lamoureux September 22, 2013 at 6:28 AM Wow, you said so much with so little words. What is fecundity? Not part of my vocabulary, if I am in the majority of people on that point you may wish to consider an alternate word to prevent distracting from the rest of the piece. I do however love this piece and was thrilled to read a couple of new ones, thanks for letting me know. Hugs Rick.

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2013 at 12:02 AM funny captcha I just saw. BMAD!!!

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2013 at 12:01 AM this is beautiful and goes so well with your avatar too!!

Wayne Hill September 21, 2013 at 2:22 PM You are the one who never sleeps.....this is another great poem to add to your collection.

Eileen Manassian September 21, 2013 at 2:03 PM That's my girl! You tell 'em! AMAZING! This is a wonderful piece...full of passion and fire! :) Great one!!!