Robert James Liguori Poet Lay

My Cold Home

This damp tank is my current home
where my toes are chilled to the bone.
I simply do as I am told
but the distress is getting old.
I cuddle in the frigid seat,
my home is void of any heat.

Theme: Home
Tuesday, March 29, 2022
Form L - Lay - New Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France April 8, 2022 at 1:40 PM Robert, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your poem ~Constance

Sara Kendrick April 7, 2022 at 4:07 AM Congrats on your very expressive and descriptive work. I hope just a write and not a reality. At least spring is on the way in some parts of the world and maybe outside in the sun will be better. Sara

Christuraj Alex April 4, 2022 at 7:05 AM "distress is getting old" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2022 at 7:19 PM That is sure a sad one. Hope it is not true for you. Well written lay, Robert