Eileen Manassian Poet Etheree

My Cloud Number 9 Inspired By Bryan Adams

9
A cloud…
A prelude
To ecstasy
A sweet fluffy bed
That carries you and me
A floating castle of dreams
Where nothing is quite what it seems
Cloud Number 9: our room in the sky
Making love...as we "watch the world go by!"

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Demetrios Trifiatis February 27, 2013 at 7:37 AM You have uplifted our spirits as high as the sky! Excellent writing!

Ale A A February 27, 2013 at 6:57 AM A Happy, uplifting, put a smile on your face poem.

John Loving Iii February 27, 2013 at 2:12 AM Bryan Adams To Love a Woman. I am mesmerised by it. Eileen Manassian February 27, 2013 at 4:15 AM I'm mesmerised by all his songs..but you are right...this one is absolutely amazing! I must say...Cloud #9 has wonderful memories for me! Thanks for the post! :)

Jack Ellison February 26, 2013 at 7:47 PM WOW WOW WOW!!!!! This one's a goodie my dear Eileen... A WINNER! Big whopping hugs from the Jakester! xox Eileen Manassian February 27, 2013 at 4:16 AM I'll take all the big whopping hugs I can get! :) Thanks for the post....Glad you liked it!

Richard Lamoureux February 26, 2013 at 6:32 PM This is so funny I just posted the poem Cloud walker. Your cloud Number Nine seems a lot more provocitive than mine *lol* Eileen Manassian February 27, 2013 at 4:46 AM I know....how awesome is that? I've been wanting to write something about Cloud 9 because I just adore that song by Bryan Adams....and well, the version I had in mind was a little over the top....so...this is what I came up with! Glad you liked it! :)

Ilene Bauer February 26, 2013 at 5:21 PM this is a format i've never tried, but you've nailed it here! Eileen Manassian February 27, 2013 at 4:47 AM I like to try new things every now and then when I get the chance! Great to hear from you, Ilene! :)

Sara Kendrick February 26, 2013 at 4:43 PM Enjoyed reading this one today..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Eileen Manassian February 27, 2013 at 4:47 AM OH WOW! That is such a treasured compliment, Sara. I don't participate in contests...I haven't gotten the nerve to yet! We will see when that takes place! Hugs!

David Williams February 26, 2013 at 3:17 PM Eileen very cool write, I like...David Eileen Manassian February 27, 2013 at 4:48 AM Thanks David....I like that you like! :)