Eve Roper Poet Free verse

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My Cloud By: Eve Roper

Voices, whisper in one’s ear
                                              Acknowledge
                                                Inspiration
                                                   Advice
                                                Challenge
                                                   Hope

                        Transform words into a descriptive work of art

                                                 Criticize
                                                  Offend
                                               Denunciate
                         Provoking hurt feelings and low self-esteem

                            We cannot please everyone in our world
                        But if I can reach at least  just one out of ten
                                          Then I’m pleased
                 If you can't say something nice, don't say nothing at all”    
                                                                                                                                  You're invading my space so please “GET OFF MY CLOUD”  

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By’ Eve Roper 6/10/2015
Contest Name : Hey you, get off of my cloud (MY CLOUD By: ?????) - 
Sponsor: SKAT A

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Poet Destroyer A June 18, 2015 at 11:39 PM Eve, Congratulations on your cloud win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Sara Kendrick June 18, 2015 at 3:19 PM Congrats on your win...Sara Eve Roper June 18, 2015 at 3:29 PM Thank you, Sara, Hugs eve

Skat A June 16, 2015 at 9:22 PM LOL, love it EVE, Congratulations on a poem well done. Thank you for entering my CLOUD contest. Luv SKAT Eve Roper June 16, 2015 at 9:35 PM Thank you, Skat, for allowing me to be on the list it warms my heart. Hugs eve

Constance La France June 12, 2015 at 7:21 PM Eve, this is outstanding, wonderful and amazing, perfect for the contest and thanks for visiting my poem bite me, I was wondering which word of mine you used

Afolabi Muideen June 12, 2015 at 3:05 AM Good work for this beautiful poem,I like it.....A.M.

Darlene Gifford June 12, 2015 at 1:40 AM Hi, Eve, I liked your contest poem and best of luck to you. I entered the "His all seeing Eye" contest. Did you? Blessings, Darlene

Connie Marcum Wong June 11, 2015 at 11:23 PM I totally agree with your last lines. Silence is golden in more ways than one here. Great entry Eve. I hope it does real well.

Sara Kendrick June 11, 2015 at 12:30 PM Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for your visit to my page..Sara Eve Roper June 11, 2015 at 7:58 PM Thank you, Sara, for every poem I write it seem it takes a lot to try to come up with something. I love the inspiring compliments so I'll keep writing. Hugs eve

Emile Pinet June 11, 2015 at 12:26 PM Very well written with strong images and great flow. Emile. Eve Roper June 11, 2015 at 8:01 PM Thank you, Emile, for your compliments and support. Hugs eve

Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2015 at 8:10 AM - "If you can not say something nice, do not say nothing at all" - Wise and important words - I love it, dear Eve :) - I wish you good luck in the contest .... and a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eve Roper June 11, 2015 at 8:00 PM Thank you, Anne Lise, for the inspiring compliments and support. Hugs eve

Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 4:41 AM wow such a powerful poem Eve - I LOVE it - good luck in the contest this sure packs a punch! Hugs jan xx Eve Roper June 11, 2015 at 8:02 PM Thank you, Jan, for the inspiring compliments and support. I was thinking of the whirl wind. Hugs eve

Tim Smith June 10, 2015 at 11:24 PM A song popped into my head...you can't please everyone so you got to please yourself... Great message Eve and good luck....Tim Eve Roper June 11, 2015 at 8:04 PM Thank you, Tim, some times we need to set a small fire to get things started, thank you again for the inspiring compliments and support. Hugs eve