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April 19, 2026

"Your City" Premiere Poetry Contest

placed Seventh

My City Kolkata

My Kolkata was Shamsul Huda Road, Tanning area, Shiva Temple,
Lansdowne Park. My hallowed celebration was 
month-long festival in the neighbourhood -
sometimes the open-air play like Madhusudan story,
sometimes the pastoral songs by Nirmalendu Choudhury. 
From far watched prestigious Modern School, and the line-up of cars at lunch, 
waited at Beckbagan stop to Jadavpur University, for Number forty-five bus.

Sometimes walked to Lady Brabourne College to save the bus-fare, 
spent hours at Gol Park Library, among books which marvelled me. 
Sometimes travelled to National Library at Alipore for some fictitious reason, 
chatting at 8B bus-stop, those friends are lost to me now, 
don't find them on Facebook, never dared to step in Jadavpur Coffee-House.

Moved far away, Kolkata has changed. 

British Council was not too far, experienced Shakespeare and Dickens there.
And New Market was on the way, spent hours and hours with no purchase,
having the bus-fare was enough. Once entered Victoria Memorial Museum,
did we bunk classes? Don't remember. 
Muktaangan Theatre? My Teacher-aunt was so fond of!

Kolkata has changed fast! A little slow…would be better!

The smell of earth hasn't changed…the petrichor!
So exhilarating was getting drenched while returning from college! 
Wet saree, didn't even know what a make-up was,
water dripping off from braids of hair !

The petrichor gets me back to the soil,
to the same place, which once I left!
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Kauffman Avatar
June 19, 2026 at 11:32 AM
Mala, I am fascinated by your vision of Kolkata from your childhood to today - the ways it has changed yet the most basic part of the city, "the smell of earth hasn't changed." You have so beautifully integrated the city with your experiences and memories. Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the city tour. Blessings to you, my friend. Hope you are planning a trip out this way, to these cities.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 19, 2026 at 1:32 PM
Thank you, Sam, for your kind appreciation of my poem. I originally wrote this poem in Bengali which is my home-language. For this contest, I decided to translate it in English. So delighted to receive your lovely comment - you have inspired me to continue writing. I want you to know about a blog “An Excerpt From My Autobiographical Novel” I posted a few days ago. It is a translation from my book published in 2023. You may like this part (second chapter). I went to San Jose in May to visit my son and see the house he bought. It was a short vacation. Do you live close by? I am sorry I couldn’t meet you. Next time I visit, I will definitely let you know. Hope you are having a great summer. Love and best wishes, Dear friend.
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 3:05 PM
I really like how you mentioned petrichor. So nice! And congrats for the well deserved win
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 3:26 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. I read your poem, really loved it, Congratulations for the trophy. I wrote another poem about my present city, Mississauga, in Acrostic format, but later decided to enter this one. You are a fantastic poet - all your poems are beautiful, touching, and sometimes humorous - you create fabulous stories, and can handle all the different emotions with so much ease. Thanks again for popping in and reading my work.
Daniels Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 9:06 PM
Aah Malabika ! You’ve painted such beautiful interesting memories in this poem about your City. Through it I felt your emotions & growth. I like how you mentioned change, as all cities change, like humans. ThkU for sharing. I enjoyed this read today. Congrats on your placement in the City Contest. Well done. Shine on., Ghairo
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 10:03 AM
Thank you very much, Dear Ghario. I become emotional and nostalgic thinking about the city I grew up. Delighted to know you enjoyed my poem. Best wishes ~
George Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 9:24 PM
A picturesque description of Kolkata city. The very thought of it brings nostalgic memories to you. When we live far away, the thoughts of our native city brings a special delight. Congratulations dear Mala on your win.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 10:01 AM
Thank you, Dear Valsa. When it comes to talking about Kolkata, I become emotional. I wrote this first in Bengali, and thought it was a good attempt. Sending you love and best wishes.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 1:37 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "My City Kolkata" write/story. Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a Lovely/Blessed Day writing away...............
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 3:07 PM
Thank you, Paula. Really appreciate your inspiring words.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 10:12 PM
Very nostalgic. Well writen.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 8:32 AM
Thank you. Your appreciation inspires me. Probably you are familiar with all the places I mentioned.
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