My Children

I'm raising my kid's the best i know how,
I give them all the attention a kid should ever need AND MORE,
I'm determined my kid's will flourish and fully succeed.
My kid's are thriving and have a wonderful life,
They are my shining star on a cold dark night,
They bring joy and happiness into my life,
They are my children.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Pettit Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 1:43 PM
Welcome to the site. Nice little devotional write to your children. Only one thing: "kid's" does not require an apostrophe since no genitive or possessive case exists there.
Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
- Beautiful ... from a mother who loves her children. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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