Poesy Relish Poet Tanka

My Child, I Cry For Thee-A Lament

(For my first child, 
who could not make it to this world)


Your motion I feel
Oblivious of the pain
My son I rejoiced
If only you were with me
For you I mourn in regret

©Nadiya (11 Feb '15)

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 12, 2015 at 7:27 AM Sad so sad. I feel for you Nad But you have transformed your grief into a beautiful poem. Great one.God bless you.Your friend Rajat Poesy Relish February 12, 2015 at 7:31 AM Thank you very much Dear friend.

Nette Onclaud February 11, 2015 at 5:57 PM I feel with you; this is definitely hard to bear.. so beautifully expressed, Nadiya..namaskar and huggs Poesy Relish February 11, 2015 at 9:27 PM Thank you Nette... nic of you to stop by.. hugs nad!

Andrea Dietrich February 11, 2015 at 4:00 PM I'm sorry for this great loss you went through. a very feeling poem. Poesy Relish February 11, 2015 at 9:28 PM Thank you Andrea... appreciate your visit and nice words.nad!

Peter Lewis Holmes February 11, 2015 at 1:15 AM Very beautiful and soulful Nadiya...this poem scratched my heart. ....and thank you for your commens..I find them very encouraging..Peter Poesy Relish February 11, 2015 at 1:34 AM Thank you Peter... I enjoyed reading your poem.

Njeri Hunjeri February 11, 2015 at 12:39 AM Am Sorry about that. Stay strong Poesy Relish February 11, 2015 at 12:47 AM thank younjeri :)... sometimes memories flood in and its difficult to forget the bygones