My Child

she sparkles, she radiates mesmerizes, fascinates full of magnetic appeal, iridescent child,

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Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2012 10:41:00 AM

From reading this, you could also be describing a pyrotechnics display. Good dodoitsu Francine.

Judy Ball

Date: 10/3/2011 10:29:00 AM

I do so agree. This is so lovely and radiates the love a mother has for her child. A doctor once told me only one truly beautiful baby was ever born and every mother in the world has had it. Great job here. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2011 1:27:00 PM

A lovely little poem for that iridescent child!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/2/2011 6:40:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with this winner..Enjoyed reading this morn..A child that everyone dreams of in their life..Sara

Rockman Pritts

Date: 10/2/2011 12:55:00 AM

Short. To the point. Good thought. One typo. (mesmerizEs) I hate when I do it but I'm glad to be corrected. :-)

Francine Roberts
Date: 10/2/2011 2:26:00 AM

thanks