My Child

she sparkles, she radiates
mesmerizes, fascinates
full of magnetic appeal,
iridescent child,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 10:41 AM
From reading this, you could also be describing a pyrotechnics display. Good dodoitsu Francine.
Ball Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 10:29 AM
I do so agree. This is so lovely and radiates the love a mother has for her child. A doctor once told me only one truly beautiful baby was ever born and every mother in the world has had it. Great job here. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 1:27 PM
A lovely little poem for that iridescent child!
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 6:40 AM
Good luck in the contest with this winner..Enjoyed reading this morn..A child that everyone dreams of in their life..Sara
Pritts Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 12:55 AM
Short. To the point. Good thought. One typo. (mesmerizEs) I hate when I do it but I'm glad to be corrected. :-)
Roberts Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 2:26 AM
thanks
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