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My Cheating Husband (Written For Rauls Contest)

My cheating husband Our love betrayed and broke I must travel on

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Date: 3/5/2010 11:49:00 AM

Sometimes, one just has to pick up the pieces and do just that. Interesting slant on the contest topic. Best wishes with it. Keep on writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/5/2010 10:50:00 AM

I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today. I am glad to see your poetry posted here amongest the others I am reading today Kelly. Wishing you a weekend filled with love and inspiration and the best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/5/2010 7:53:00 AM

Surely, the sting of unfaithfulness is a heavy load for any heart to bear, Kelly. You took a unique approach to the contest and I admire your creativity. Enjoyed your senryu! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2010 4:03:00 AM

Good idea for the contest..Wish you success....Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara