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My Chaotic Cousin From Outer Space

dripping my red ink… my clumsy cousin from space lovable lunkhead Dotted, splattered, kicked the bucket under My sofa…what a mess…what a great guest... bleeds on my rug pools of tie-dyed fiber he is so sorry roll my eyes here on planet nice, we take our time, we often rhyme dan’s just a dinosaur from planet earth, a primate inclinations to spin tornado style disasters follow me one day, i shall visit, his land of chaos straighten the curves tidy up the streets set regular hours bring peace and quiet

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Date: 6/21/2016 11:52:00 AM
A 7-plus, Kim. Congratulations on your win! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2016 12:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice! :)
Date: 6/21/2016 11:34:00 AM
Congrats on your great win, Kim. Loved your poem. ~karam~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2016 12:39:00 PM
Thank you, Karam!
Date: 6/21/2016 6:29:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on you podium 2nd Place win in the contest. Great poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2016 10:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra :)
Date: 6/21/2016 5:42:00 AM
Loved the layout and theme Kim very chaotic! Great job and congratulations
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2016 10:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, Brian! :)
Date: 6/14/2016 7:46:00 AM
Love the tornado shape Kim, it adds to the visual effect of the poem. A very clever interpretation of the theme.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2016 7:49:00 AM
Thank you, James!

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