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My Cardinal

my cardinal bird singing sweetly just to me~ now eating your seed Date Written: 3/15/2022 6 Place Syllable counts: howmanysyllables.com Bird Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2022 9:26:00 AM

Congratulations, Paula! Pleased to see you on the winners' list. You chose a lovely bird! ~ Regards & blessings, my friend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/7/2022 12:03:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my bird write. I love cardinals. Have a Great/blessed day................

Bill Baker

Date: 4/6/2022 7:53:00 AM

Cardinals are so beautiful. I love it when one comes to visit our front yard trees. Well written Haiku, Paula. Congrats on placing in the contest! Yeah! Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/6/2022 9:21:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this red bird write. I do not have any cardinals here. I did before I moved. Have a Great/blessed day................

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/4/2022 8:49:00 PM

This is a haiku that's well done. Delightful, Paula ~

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/6/2022 9:09:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my little cardinal bird write. Have a Great/blessed day................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/30/2022 6:43:00 AM

Creative winner. Way to go. Congrats on being on the winners' list. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2022 8:06:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this bird write. I love cardinals. They are so pretty. Have a Great/blessed day................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/29/2022 5:56:00 PM

I'm back with congratulations on your win with this imagery rich delight, Paula. Blessings

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2022 8:04:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you came back. It is always good to see you. Glad you like the cardinal bird write. Have a Great/blessed day................

Eve Roper

Date: 3/28/2022 9:37:00 PM

Great imagery, Paula , congratulations on your win on Tania Kitchin's Bird Haiku contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/29/2022 10:26:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my Haiku cardinal write. Have a blessed day................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2022 9:21:00 PM

so sweet. congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/29/2022 10:25:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this cardinal bird write. Have a blessed day................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/27/2022 9:26:00 PM

Singing for me and eating others' seed. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2022 10:14:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my write. Yes, singing and eating a bird's life. Have a blessed day................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/27/2022 4:54:00 PM

Paula, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2022 10:12:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. I did not know, I had a win in your wonder/fun contest. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my cardinal Haiku write. Have a blessed day................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/23/2022 2:05:00 PM

This is a charming haiku, Paula. I love cardinals. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2022 10:09:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your best wishes. Glad you like my cardinal bird write. I love these birds. Have a blessed day................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/18/2022 9:16:00 AM

sweetly done. Good luck!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2022 11:58:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day................

Bill Baker

Date: 3/17/2022 2:10:00 PM

Nice entry for the contest, Paula. At some point I want to enter a few contests. A Cardinal is a good subject for a Haiku. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2022 11:58:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like my Cardinal Haiku write. Have a blessed day with smiles.............