Paula Goldsmith Poet Haiku

My Cardinal

my cardinal bird
singing sweetly just to me~
now eating your seed   



Date Written: 3/15/2022

 6 Place

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Bird Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Paul Callus April 7, 2022 at 9:26 AM Congratulations, Paula! Pleased to see you on the winners' list. You chose a lovely bird! ~ Regards & blessings, my friend. Paula Goldsmith April 7, 2022 at 12:03 PM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my bird write. I love cardinals. Have a Great/blessed day................

Bill Baker April 6, 2022 at 7:53 AM Cardinals are so beautiful. I love it when one comes to visit our front yard trees. Well written Haiku, Paula. Congrats on placing in the contest! Yeah! Bill Paula Goldsmith April 6, 2022 at 9:21 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this red bird write. I do not have any cardinals here. I did before I moved. Have a Great/blessed day................

Line Gauthier April 4, 2022 at 8:49 PM This is a haiku that's well done. Delightful, Paula ~ Paula Goldsmith April 6, 2022 at 9:09 AM Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my little cardinal bird write. Have a Great/blessed day................

Sara Kendrick March 30, 2022 at 6:43 AM Creative winner. Way to go. Congrats on being on the winners' list. Sara Paula Goldsmith March 30, 2022 at 8:06 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this bird write. I love cardinals. They are so pretty. Have a Great/blessed day................

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 29, 2022 at 5:56 PM I'm back with congratulations on your win with this imagery rich delight, Paula. Blessings Paula Goldsmith March 30, 2022 at 8:04 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you came back. It is always good to see you. Glad you like the cardinal bird write. Have a Great/blessed day................

Eve Roper March 28, 2022 at 9:37 PM Great imagery, Paula , congratulations on your win on Tania Kitchin's Bird Haiku contest. Paula Goldsmith March 29, 2022 at 10:26 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my Haiku cardinal write. Have a blessed day................

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2022 at 9:21 PM so sweet. congrats on your win Paula Goldsmith March 29, 2022 at 10:25 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this cardinal bird write. Have a blessed day................

Christuraj Alex March 27, 2022 at 9:26 PM Singing for me and eating others' seed. Beautiful. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith March 28, 2022 at 10:14 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my write. Yes, singing and eating a bird's life. Have a blessed day................

Tania Kitchin March 27, 2022 at 4:54 PM Paula, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku! Paula Goldsmith March 28, 2022 at 10:12 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. I did not know, I had a win in your wonder/fun contest. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my cardinal Haiku write. Have a blessed day................

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 23, 2022 at 2:05 PM This is a charming haiku, Paula. I love cardinals. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn Paula Goldsmith March 28, 2022 at 10:09 AM Thank You, for writing and for your best wishes. Glad you like my cardinal bird write. I love these birds. Have a blessed day................

Caren Krutsinger March 18, 2022 at 9:16 AM sweetly done. Good luck! Paula Goldsmith March 18, 2022 at 11:58 AM Thank You, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day................

Bill Baker March 17, 2022 at 2:10 PM Nice entry for the contest, Paula. At some point I want to enter a few contests. A Cardinal is a good subject for a Haiku. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill Paula Goldsmith March 18, 2022 at 11:58 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like my Cardinal Haiku write. Have a blessed day with smiles.............