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My Car

I bought a new Car of creamy color after a long time I wished but needed a an expert driver Searched and I got an young one with the grace of God for a month's trial he was employed I saw every morning with my smiling eyes took care of it even my wife cries because that was my sweet dream car One day, I am and my driver started Car was on speed and CD player was on up wards a hilly top so nice was that spot Suddenly, heard a sound...drum... Car stopped for a few seconds our mind was blocked struck with a big rock seen snub nosed lovely car I hold my head high to the blue Sky Thanked God for saving us, loss was no matter we returned to our home, my wife again cried Entry: Driving me Crazy Sponsor: Paula Swanson Written by: bldevnath Written on: 06/09/2011

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Date: 9/7/2011 7:14:00 PM
Yes, That kind of jolt would make most of us give thanks for life spared. I wish I still had one. Great story Bl.
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Date: 9/6/2011 4:12:00 PM
a very nice story in poetry on this fantastic dream car bl and luv those times wife cried..have been there too luv.. good luck in the contest.. glad no one was hurt ..if true tale..
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Date: 9/5/2011 9:51:00 PM
on a sad note....poor car.....witty work!
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