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My Candle Light

My Candle Light Sung to the tune of Simon and Garfunkel, “Bridge over Troubled Water” Splendor in my life Since you came by A tender heart that shines A voice of hope, my guide. From the very start I was warmed by your smile I knew you were one of a kind Like an angel standing by-y my side My candle light Like an angel standing by-y my side My candle light. Colors in my life Crystal shine Catching rainbow shades of light With you I choose to fly. My spirit reborn Not evermore forlorn For you are all I want Like an angel standing by-y my side My candle light Like an angel standing by-y my side My candle light. My love, my light Please take my life My heart, my soul, my all I give to you forevermore I'm on your side Oh, never fear, I'll never leave Together we're destined to be Like an angel standing by-y your side I'm your candle light Like an angel standing by-y your side I'm your candle light. Your candle light. By CarolineCecile Copyright © 04.10.10 For Carolyn Devonshire's contest. "Simon and Garfunkel"

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Date: 4/21/2010 12:48:00 PM
You should copyright this as there are some lines striking enough for someone to lift. This flows very well to that song. You should be proud. Congratulations to you! Gerard.
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Date: 4/18/2010 3:04:00 PM
Caroline, Wow! A Big Congratulations on this great poem winning first place. Enjoy the spotlight, you deserve it. Love, Connie
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Date: 4/17/2010 2:27:00 PM
Dear Caroline, My warm congratulations on your Ist Place win in Carolyn's Contest!! Enjoy your win!! Well deserved indeed! And thank you for reading and leaving your always, kind comments for me... Love, Audrey
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Date: 4/16/2010 9:57:00 PM
Very beautiful. Congrats on your big win! LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/16/2010 7:57:00 PM
Beautiful angelic words Congrats on your win Caroline
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:17:00 PM
That's true love, right there! Great poem for the crowning glory!! Hooray for you, CarolineCecile!!!!
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on first place with these wonderful lyrics. I have always, loved that song, Bridge Over Troubled Waters... love Constance
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:13:00 PM
What an uplifting view. Nice take off from this familiar song. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations Caroline, Quite worthy first place win, Enjoy, Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:45:00 PM
Now that the contest is over, I can add this to my favorites. Thanks so much for these great lyrics! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:22:00 PM
Congrats Caroline on your 1st place win in Carolyn's contest.. brilliant lyrics and wonderful win for u to enjoy as we share in your beautiful write..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/16/2010 3:50:00 PM
This was so beautiful, Caroline! 1st place!!!! Congratulations, and well deserved!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/16/2010 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your first-place win in my contest, Caroline. I found your lyrics to be very inspiring! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/13/2010 5:37:00 PM
you took your time and did it right. John H Loving III
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:11:00 PM
well constructed!
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:16:00 PM
Sounds like a winner that will be front and center..Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/11/2010 8:14:00 AM
Excellent Caroline and good luck in Carolyn's contest... an amazing write for this beautiful song.. get ready for a trip to the winners circle...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/11/2010 8:10:00 AM
This should do very well, Caroline!! You tackled one of a favorite songs, and did it justice! Good luck in the contest! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/10/2010 10:43:00 PM
ENJOYED THANK YOU
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Date: 4/10/2010 10:38:00 PM
Romantic and beautiful..Charma
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