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My Candle- Light Shines On You

An Internal~ Flame Flicks During Every Break You, Breathe. For Your Words Are Not Callous, But Chary And STUNNING To Me.. With~Out This LIGHT Of Fire That Burns Through, Your Eyes: LIFE Would Have "NO MEANING" Above Mine... So I Ask Keep This Flame Alive For It Will "NEVER" Skip A Beat, As I Shall COM~ Ply To Your Every COMMAND Of TRUTH; Where My Candle~ Light Burns BRIGHT, Just For YOU Among Poetry N' Our Love..Ever~Lasting TRIBUTE That " IMPRINTS " US ALWAyS!!!!

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Jancarl Campi

Date: 6/18/2012 4:57:00 AM

Quite a poem!! Keep writing.

Justcallme Britt

Date: 6/18/2012 1:21:00 AM

WHOOOOOOOA!!! Carma, you are such a sweetheart! Ooooooh, okay it all makes since now. Your name must be Sweetheart "Forever*Lust" Carma <3

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/17/2012 7:42:00 AM

Oh wow Carma!!! This is an excellent piece of art here..indeed original!!! You are doing real good with this..loving it!! Regards..INK-U-SCRIPT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/17/2012 6:01:00 AM

Love it...love it....love it..........Super tribute!!! - Have a beautiful Sunday Carma! - oxox Anne-Lise

Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/17/2012 11:26:00 AM

"thank you Anne-Lise, took me three hours to get it right.. Glad you enjoyed this shape. Xox0 Carma"

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 6/17/2012 4:22:00 AM

You are soooo dreamy and enchanting!!! MAGNIFICENT WRITE!!!! I am sure he will smile ear to ear, when he takes gander at this splendor!!!!

Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/17/2012 11:22:00 AM

....and it did!!!!

Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/17/2012 4:39:00 AM

"Aaaaahhhhhh.... Elliot my heart just melted away!!! thank you so000 kindly for A delightful, response... You made my morning; and I'm sure he will;as it will go straight to the lock box! Xox0 Carma"