My Candle- Light Shines On You

An
                       Internal~
                    Flame Flicks
                    During Every
                     Break You,
                       Breathe.
               For Your Words Are
             Not Callous, But Chary
             And STUNNING To Me..
            With~Out This LIGHT Of
            Fire That Burns Through,
         Your Eyes: LIFE Would Have
         "NO MEANING" Above Mine...
           So I Ask Keep This Flame 
             Alive For It Will "NEVER" 
         Skip A Beat, As I Shall COM~
         Ply To Your Every COMMAND 
         Of TRUTH; Where My Candle~ 
 Light Burns BRIGHT, Just For YOU Among 
 Poetry N' Our  Love..Ever~Lasting TRIBUTE
                  That    " IMPRINTS "
                     US ALWAyS!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/18/2012 4:57:00 AM
Quite a poem!! Keep writing.
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Date: 6/18/2012 1:21:00 AM
WHOOOOOOOA!!! Carma, you are such a sweetheart! Ooooooh, okay it all makes since now. Your name must be Sweetheart "Forever*Lust" Carma <3
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Date: 6/17/2012 7:42:00 AM
Oh wow Carma!!! This is an excellent piece of art here..indeed original!!! You are doing real good with this..loving it!! Regards..INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 6/17/2012 6:01:00 AM
Love it...love it....love it..........Super tribute!!! - Have a beautiful Sunday Carma! - oxox Anne-Lise
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/17/2012 11:26:00 AM
"thank you Anne-Lise, took me three hours to get it right.. Glad you enjoyed this shape. Xox0 Carma"
Date: 6/17/2012 4:22:00 AM
You are soooo dreamy and enchanting!!! MAGNIFICENT WRITE!!!! I am sure he will smile ear to ear, when he takes gander at this splendor!!!!
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/17/2012 11:22:00 AM
....and it did!!!!
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/17/2012 4:39:00 AM
"Aaaaahhhhhh.... Elliot my heart just melted away!!! thank you so000 kindly for A delightful, response... You made my morning; and I'm sure he will;as it will go straight to the lock box! Xox0 Carma"
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