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My Brutal Realization

A fierce ache within my chest an intense crushing feeling The mere thought of you has my being vibrating from searing pain How foolish to trust in another "I'm not like the rest!".... only makes me doubt more Physically...the scars I can handle.... it's the scars upon my Essence I can't take any longer... Impossible to hide the harsh pain behind a smile any longer I can't fight your ripping at my emotions with your rusty dagger... You broke me beyond repair... open wounds never allowed to heal.... if you had cared at all you would see this but I see you never did.... my brutal realization

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Date: 4/30/2020 3:22:00 PM
Brutal indeed. Painful topic, well versed.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/1/2020 4:57:00 AM
Kenneth thank you for your Comment!;)
Date: 4/10/2020 11:26:00 AM
Another WOW!! from me, Poetess. Powerful writing in the very extreme I would have to say...impressive stuff indeed. Lots of warmest wishes. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/1/2020 4:58:00 AM
Thank you so much John!;) all my affection!;)
Date: 4/5/2020 2:00:00 PM
That is very painful. Healing wishes and greetings, Kai
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/10/2020 4:28:00 AM
Kai it's always a pleasure having you stop by!;) thank you!
Date: 4/5/2020 9:16:00 AM
Hi Brenda: A beautiful finale to a sad poem. Bravo!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/10/2020 4:27:00 AM
Ralph thank you!;)
Date: 4/4/2020 9:37:00 AM
Sounds like a "Fatal Attraction", well done Brenda...
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/4/2020 4:52:00 PM
Lol thank you Charlie! Appreciated!;)
Date: 4/4/2020 7:58:00 AM
Powerful verse of someone betrayed in love. Hope your well Brenda. Stay safe. Tom
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/4/2020 4:52:00 PM
Tom thank you my friend! I am well I hope you and yours are well!;)
Date: 4/4/2020 7:55:00 AM
Wowsah. I cringed reading this! POTENT ripping ink Brenda, palpable pain. Hugs!!!! xomo
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/4/2020 4:51:00 PM
Mo thank you so much!;)

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