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My Brother

My brother is a spirit His shadow haunts the walls I've heard him in the midnight hour Walking through the hall I've seen him turning doorknobs I've heard him rattle chains I've heard him moaning ghostly songs That sing of past remains I've felt him in the dark of night I've shivered from the cold I've felt him reaching out to me To find someone to hold Through misty dreams I've heard his voice Calling out to me Beckoning to reach my hand And set my spirit free But I refrain and I remain Adrift on solid ground Wondering if this could be My long lost brother found Rockman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/13/2012 7:42:00 AM
Goose bumps rushing as I read.Thanks so much for directing me to it!
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Date: 6/22/2011 12:54:00 PM
wonderful rhyme, congrats on your win
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Date: 6/21/2011 8:57:00 AM
Many congrats on your win in our contest, Rockman : ) Carolyn and I loved your poem.
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Date: 6/21/2011 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's & Jack's "Ghosts" contest Rockman. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 9:38:00 PM
wow, this one is awesome. One of the ones I like best. Congratulations in the contest.
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Date: 6/20/2011 6:10:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carolyn, Rockman
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Date: 6/20/2011 4:16:00 PM
It would be nice to know. Wonderful win for you. Congratulaions. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:27:00 PM
Congrats Rockman on your wonderful win in the Ghosts contest with this amazing entry ..enjoy another sweet victory for excellence in poetry luv..
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:27:00 PM
Wonderful write, Rockman. Congratulations on your win in the Ghosts contest! Jack and I judged blindly and there were many good entries that did not place, so those who did should feel very proud. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:20:00 PM
congrats on your big win...very nice rhymes and a nice story..true? BG
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Date: 6/19/2011 10:15:00 AM
good words man! 7up
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Date: 6/19/2011 7:38:00 AM
Creative and touchy write on brother, Rockman
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