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My Brother

My Brother Dear God, You recently took my brother home, He was ready,not a cry or moan . I know you're listening, could you tell him , I love him and miss him. So young and so sweet, he could be the perfect angel. In heaven he will shine,so humble and kind. Someday I will see him again,my brother my friend. F

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Date: 1/1/2024 2:52:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your sadness' thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Holly Farmer2
Date: 1/1/2024 9:16:00 AM
Thankyou and God bless.
Date: 12/31/2023 9:45:00 PM
hits the soul this
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Date: 12/31/2023 4:02:00 AM
I am sorry for your loss... Welcome to Poetry Soup..
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Holly Farmer2
Date: 12/31/2023 6:09:00 AM
Thankyou.
Date: 12/31/2023 3:23:00 AM
Your poem is sad and beautiful.
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Holly Farmer2
Date: 12/31/2023 6:10:00 AM
I appreciate your comment ,thank you.

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