Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

My Broken Soul

Future soul needs saved,
by a ghost from her past
Caring and loving presence,
a spirit none can surpass

A being that needs that touch,
advise from back in the day
An essence that left this earth
One that forgave ones misguided ways

Fool who made many wrong descions,
needs daddy's strong embrace
Comforted with a "Daddy knows!"
Arms that kept her safe

Need of my essence saved,
take it when next you go
Wrapped in a fathers love,
beg you to keep me whole

How will we meet again, 
if I'm damaged once more
Your baby girl needs you,
so please save my broken soul

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John Hamilton September 20, 2019 at 9:48 AM This is very touching, reached out and grabbed my emotions, I don't have kids but I was a kid looking for a fathers love, so it did have an impact on me. Brenda Chiri September 20, 2019 at 11:22 AM Thank you so much John! I miss my dad no matter how old I get! He and I were so much alike!;)

Chris Green September 20, 2019 at 7:02 AM This beautiful poem definitely reaches in and touches the heart of the reader. The sadness and the longing are deeply felt. The need for that strength, that comfort and that assurance cries from your words Brenda. The emotions in this are incredibly felt. Brenda Chiri September 20, 2019 at 8:38 AM Thank you Chris! I guess I have done my job if the reader can feel it!;)

Sandra Adams September 20, 2019 at 5:11 AM This one feels so sad to me. A plea for a father’s love to help make the world a better place... great penning one can feel the emotions in this one ... hugs Brenda Chiri September 20, 2019 at 8:38 AM Thank you Sandy I appreciate your comment!;)

Regina Mcintosh September 20, 2019 at 4:26 AM So sad for me... It seems just "haunting" I suppose. You definitely penned a graceful and enchanting poem, yet still so sad :(. Blessings to you Brenda Chiri September 20, 2019 at 8:37 AM Regina thank you! Sad? Yes it is I guess reminds me of my dad!;)