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My Broken Heart

Did you hear me call? I stood on the portico Repeatedly called your name, You had turned away Before I was calling you, You turned fast, walked away. I shall not call you -- You have brusquely turned away, Now you must follow your heart I no longer care, You have killed my love for you I do not care where you are. Still, I think of you I wish you every success I miss your gentle caress, My love was tender But I no longer anguish My broken heart you have crushed. written January 28, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/30/2022 2:01:00 AM

This sounds rough and raw."You have killed my love for you I do not care where you are. " Wow! I mean WOW!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/30/2022 8:45:00 AM

I think that is how many men feel (from my experiences) when a wife leaves them for someone else, particularly when they desert their children, too.

Bill Baker

Date: 1/29/2022 8:37:00 AM

The pain is what we allow it to be, but in this world, all things will pass. Sad poem, as is life at times. Take care, Milt. Bill

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/29/2022 8:42:00 AM

Thanks, Bill. I was trying out the Sedoka form. Thank goodness I'm not experiencing the emotions portrayed in the poem.