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My Breath of Nature

Breath of Nature by Nambumyeon Geoje Gyeongsangnamdo Did you know how often I think of you? Holding my tongue seems a crime. Dare I tell you I find your eyes now shimmering in the summer rain, or how you are my burst of colors in spring? As dusk settles in my sights, your smile shines down on me in the moonlight. If I touch a rose soaked in sunlight sublime, I feel the warmth of your hand in mine. In Winter, you are a snowflake dancing on air, then melts on my tongue and we become one. In Autumn, you are a golden leaf hanging near me on the breeze. As I admire your lines from tip to blade, I wait for you to brush against my cheek. You are everything beautiful in my sight I seek your spirit in nature's breath, I inhale your essence. I meander in your mystique. It seems you are a gift God brings to me each day - in water, earth, fire, sky I will carry you with me until I die, and even then you will be the elements in which I remain. Written 6/27/20 Contest – Strand Completely New Poetry Sponsor – Brian Strand

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Date: 6/29/2020 2:42:00 PM
Witty, beautifully written and with a lot of wisdom. A big big congratulations! Well deserved.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:50:00 PM
Thank you, Funom! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/29/2020 11:08:00 AM
What a lovely poem about commitment and dedication.. So many wonderful lines through out this poem..
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:50:00 PM
Thank you, SO! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/28/2020 12:07:00 PM
Rhonda, your creations is so beautiful and romantic. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:48:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/28/2020 10:51:00 AM
Rhonda, this is sublime. I love the last line that pulls it together in a forever. Congrats on your win with this lovely piece.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:48:00 PM
Thanks, Jeanne! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/28/2020 7:47:00 AM
Hi Rhonda. To find love this way in each season is a gift. Your pen wrote wonderful phrases describing your thoughts: a snow flake becoming one with you as it melts on your tongue! That's how close lovers should feel.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:47:00 PM
Thank you, Jenna! It's good to keep the romance alive. Hugs, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/27/2020 10:27:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery in this enchanting poem! Such as: As dust settles in my sights, your smile shines down on me in the moonlight. Good luck in the contest. Evelyn xx
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:16:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn! I'm grateful for your visit. Hugs, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/27/2020 5:44:00 PM
Wow!!! This poem is incredibly beautiful Rhonda. “In Winter, you are a snowflake dancing on air, then melts on my tongue and we become one.“ so many favorite lines. This poem is going straight into my faves! Hugs Connie xxoo
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:15:00 PM
Thank you, Connie! I'm so happy you liked this one, and I'm honored you are adding it to your faves. Hugs to you, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/27/2020 5:40:00 PM
An ocean of romantic love that a heart would adore to sail dearest, Rhoda. Tenderly written poem! Wonderfully written. Hugs xxx
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:13:00 PM
Thanks, Demetrios! Hugs to you, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/27/2020 4:41:00 PM
Your poetry is eternal , made so by your rare words of immortal composure, Loved it Rhonda, it doesn't get better then this xo
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:13:00 PM
Thank you, Vie! Your kind comment has put a smile on my face...so sweet of you. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/27/2020 2:39:00 PM
A very deep verse full of passion Rhonda, so well written. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:11:00 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 6/27/2020 2:21:00 PM
this is a very deep poem of intimate understanding, no love could be any deeper...thank you for sharing
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:11:00 PM
Thank you, Frederic!
Date: 6/27/2020 1:52:00 PM
Nice.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:10:00 PM
Thanks. Robert!
Date: 6/27/2020 1:33:00 PM
A great ride to meander with you through the seasons, Rhonda--a lovely write that pleases the senses. Ending lines are awesome.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:10:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 6/27/2020 1:32:00 PM
It appears you have identified the Strand! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:09:00 PM
Thanks, Rico!

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