Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Light Verse

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- My Boat -

Love my name ~ but never take it
Feel my heart ~ but never crush it
Read my words ~ but never destroy them
Warm yourself in the sun ~ but share it with me
Listen for my sad song ~ comfort me
See my smile ~ laugh along with me
A poem from my soul ~ I will be happy to share
A thought taking birth
Eyes that see even in deep darkness
A human being
I travel in my little boat in the open sea ~ there's room for you too
The whole world in front of our feet
Sunrise and sunset
An adventure ~ if you want
Together ~ always
Not in a war zone
A
peaceful journey
in
an intoxication of love
that never
will end










15.04.2016
A-L Andresen :)

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Black Matta May 12, 2016 at 12:44 PM A delicate poem. soothes my soul. Thank you :) Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2016 at 1:23 PM - Thank you very much, Black matta :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus April 21, 2016 at 4:25 PM How sweet and meaningful, Anne Lise! I would love to be in that boat where peace and serenity abound! Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen April 22, 2016 at 8:07 AM - Welcome abord, Paul :) Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Sun :)

Vera Duggan April 20, 2016 at 7:31 PM Hi Anne Lise, this is one lovely poem, nice to know you have room for me, we can see the world together, but then I guess you would sooner take your partner, how romantic that would be, lovely write my dear, take care........Vera Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2016 at 4:09 AM - Of course there is room for you, dear Vera :) - All my friends !! - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman April 18, 2016 at 10:44 AM Oh excellent poetry, just love this... Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2016 at 1:15 PM - Thank you very much, Harry - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel April 18, 2016 at 8:20 AM Love your boat Anne:) Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2016 at 1:14 PM - Thank you very much, Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso April 18, 2016 at 12:26 AM I see this , with all that happened recently as you showing who you really are, a forgiving , loving, kind, gentle, heart. I wish your little boat could hold all the world! Hugs! Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2016 at 1:13 PM - Thank you very much, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid April 17, 2016 at 5:10 PM it sails into the sunset shining in your beautiful words pal wishing you a blessing of a week dear friend Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2016 at 1:12 PM - Thank you very much, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud April 17, 2016 at 3:37 AM ride free with a life so empowered, anne.. love this!..best of sunday and huggs Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2016 at 1:52 PM - A busy weekend, Nette - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei April 17, 2016 at 1:23 AM Anne, Your boat is amazing. Really everybody needs such a sacred and splendid boat. If possible plz arrange one for me. A great write. I loved it. Super 7 from me.....Keep it up............hugs Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2016 at 1:54 PM - Of course there is room for you, Manmath :) - Thanks for nice visit a super 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May April 16, 2016 at 10:38 PM A delightful and romantic write Anne....well penned... Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2016 at 1:51 PM - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edlynn Nau April 16, 2016 at 1:00 PM President Kenedy had on his desk a sign that read, "THE SEA IS SO LARGE MY BOAT SO SMALL" and this reminded me of that! Love the use of the boat for your journey! Nicely done. Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2016 at 1:50 PM - "THE SEA IS SO LARGE MY BOAT SO SMALL" a song will learn in Sunday school, many, many years ago Edlynn - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis April 16, 2016 at 7:52 AM A fascinating poetic sailing that marvels the heart dear, Anne- Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2016 at 1:48 PM - A journey .... with true friends :) - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, dear friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick April 15, 2016 at 4:40 PM Very expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading today..Way to go if for a contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen April 15, 2016 at 5:17 PM - Not for contest, dear Sara but thanks for enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud April 15, 2016 at 3:00 PM ohh my.. i want to ride on this sail of love and affection, dear anne... so sweet.. huggs and happy day! Anne-Lise Andresen April 15, 2016 at 4:08 PM - Welcome abord on one friendship journey, Nette :) - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath April 15, 2016 at 2:34 PM Wow! It's an wonderful journey. Very deeply expressed with your soft loving heart. Words are of golden ink. 7 sure. Thanks for your grace rewarding me a good friendship from Norway. Loved always my lovey lovely friend. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen April 15, 2016 at 2:47 PM - Your friendship means a lot dear Bl :) - Thank you for the golden words and a 7 on my poem: My Boat - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith April 15, 2016 at 1:14 PM What a wonderful journey you're on Anne-Lise. Keep us all in the boat with you... Anne-Lise Andresen April 15, 2016 at 2:17 PM - I have room for many, Charlie :) - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman April 15, 2016 at 11:04 AM Hello Anne-Lise Dear One!! A beautiful and quite moving poem as usual. (I always expect nothing less from you, but the best!!) I decided to go ahead and post one of my new poems written while I was away from the Soup on my "Prose Writing Sabbatical." (I hope the "Thief" problem has been put to rest. I will keep my antenna up on this just in case some dumb, foolish person decides to try this!! They better not!!) All the best for the weekend. And a Big "7" for sure on "My Boat"!! Cheers, Gary Gary Bateman April 15, 2016 at 11:38 AM Amen! Amen! Cheers, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen April 15, 2016 at 11:13 AM - I will not look back ..... always look forward .... not cry for spilled milk .... but my "antenna" up here as well, dear Gary :) - thanks for nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner April 15, 2016 at 9:31 AM Anne-Lise, I'd go for that boat rude with you anytime. Sounds wonderful. Just a lovely poem from deep within. One of your best. Peace sweet lady:) Jan Allison April 15, 2016 at 11:20 AM a boat rude lol sounds interesting Daniel:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen April 15, 2016 at 11:06 AM - Always a pleasure :) - thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux April 15, 2016 at 8:41 AM If he is a smart man he will except this lovely invitation. Anne-Lise Andresen April 15, 2016 at 8:48 AM - A check mark ....... I get terrible seasick, Richard :))) - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anand Parmale April 15, 2016 at 8:34 AM This is very sweet poem AL....I loved the smooth flow of the poem...7 Anne-Lise Andresen April 15, 2016 at 11:03 AM - A pleasure to share with you, Anand :) - thank you for nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison April 15, 2016 at 8:12 AM Lovely:-) Anne Lise... let's hope the water remains calm and serene:-) hugs Jan 7 Anne-Lise Andresen April 15, 2016 at 11:02 AM - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)