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My Blue Space Ship

l live in a little Space Ship its all shiny and lovely blue and l wish you could all see me for today its nice brand new l float around the room where l made a little flume it has a window for the sun and l pull faces for the fun It has a lovely steering wheel and l can take it any where and just stop it if l feel put on door the sign 'beware' it has a radio that is clever l can speak rubbish all the time it will never, ever, ever say ' your'e been knocking back the wine So another day of drifting in my Space Ship made of Blue and my painkillers are a lifting so l see World, in better view. poets note; l have to take painkillers 24/7 for my illness, but its not all bad lol.

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Date: 1/21/2025 10:37:00 AM
I am a retired pharmacist so I know what these pain killers can do both good and bad. But if they can help you get through the day then it is worth it. Good poem
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 1/22/2025 6:50:00 AM
Thanks Oliver. l dont take strong painkillers anymore due to not helping anymore with the pain ( think my body got used to the med) and l have to carry medical card not to have morphine as had bad side effects from it. But all's good, i'v trained myself to keep my mind busy, listen to music etc, as it helps take mind off daily pain l get .You take care as well.Hope you saw my soup mail asking about your family tree. speak soon.J.
Date: 1/9/2025 3:23:00 AM
I am sorry you have to take painkillers every day. Don't worry, though; I have to take seven pills every morning for my various illnesses. Loved your poem. Perhaps it's for the contest of Star Trek? If so good luck.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 1/9/2025 4:13:00 AM
Thanks Victor. I'm not clever enough to enter comps on here, but thank you for compliment. Sorry you have to take loads of pills as well, but life's good when we can laugh it off and carry on. take care Jx
Date: 1/8/2025 9:40:00 AM
Hi Jacqueline I enjoyed reading your poem of make believe, then again maybe it's true. xx
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 1/8/2025 11:39:00 AM
lol, yes could be. I'm having a Beatles Yellow Submarine trip l think, but they had to pay for theirs, mines free from the NHS lol.

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