My Blue Eyed Hero

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I know there are heroes like a firefighter,
      the police, real life heroic people, a soldier;
but my hero right now is my heart doctor!
   It happened quickly- with a knife like a dagger,
plunging into my back, oh I still recall the horror!
I could not breathe and was just clinging to life,
      Gasping, I thought I was a goner;
thought-  here I come afterlife!

He wore a cap and face mask-  I saw blue,
      deep blue eyes and he said listen you;
don't be afraid because I will get you through!
  Then, to a sweet dreamland I just withdrew,
peace and tranquility were all that I knew!
That day-  Dr. MacDreamy saved me,
      it could have been my end, my last adieu;
so, this blue eyed doctor is my hero- easy!

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November 22, 2017

Poetry/Rhyme/My Blue Eyed Hero
Copyright Protected, ID 17-9643-49-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest, Hero
sponsor, Silent One

Second Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/9/2017 5:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Constance - well-done, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 11/28/2017 3:37:00 PM
Fantastic write, Broken Wings , that is how hubby feels about his new heart doctor. Through the Thanksgiving he had his near death experience again . Now a new doctor, a new pacemaker defibrillator, and his meds changed. .. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/28/2017 11:23:00 AM
Back to wish you congratulations on your win BW!!
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Date: 11/28/2017 9:18:00 AM
I liked your take on the contest, what would we do without these doctors who regularly save lives.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 11/24/2017 6:51:00 PM
Shame the only Heroes now day's are the Super Hero Marvel Comic 1. The real 1 are taken for granted sadly . Fireman . Policeman and Doctor man don't have much of ring to them do they. Sad who you gonna call Comic Con
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Date: 11/23/2017 3:28:00 PM
Oh this is wonderful. We ALL need a Dr. McDreamy in our lives!! I wrote of Lincoln (if I ever get it posted. Were he alive in my time, I would have wanted to date that guy!!)
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Date: 11/23/2017 2:54:00 AM
Excellent. Very inspiring write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/22/2017 7:47:00 PM
Wonderful words!
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Date: 11/22/2017 12:46:00 PM
What a beautifully inspired write BW! I didn't realize you had been through this. You must appreciate life so much more! I can certainly see how this doctor well deserves your hero title! Best of luck in the contest!! ~ Judy
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Date: 11/22/2017 12:45:00 PM
I will be surprised if this doesn't place well, phenomenal impacting pen, and Amen! xomo :)
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