My Blue Eyed Hero

I know there are heroes like a firefighter,
      the police, real life heroic people, a soldier;
but my hero right now is my heart doctor!
   It happened quickly- with a knife like a dagger,
plunging into my back, oh I still recall the horror!
I could not breathe and was just clinging to life,
      Gasping, I thought I was a goner;
thought-  here I come afterlife!

He wore a cap and face mask-  I saw blue,
      deep blue eyes and he said listen you;
don't be afraid because I will get you through!
  Then, to a sweet dreamland I just withdrew,
peace and tranquility were all that I knew!
That day-  Dr. MacDreamy saved me,
      it could have been my end, my last adieu;
so, this blue eyed doctor is my hero- easy!

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November 22, 2017

Poetry/Rhyme/My Blue Eyed Hero
Copyright Protected, ID 17-9643-49-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest, Hero
sponsor, Silent One

Second Place

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Gregory Richard Barden

December 9, 2017 at 5:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Constance - well-done, my friend! :-) <3

Eve Roper

November 28, 2017 at 3:37 PM

Fantastic write, Broken Wings , that is how hubby feels about his new heart doctor. Through the Thanksgiving he had his near death experience again . Now a new doctor, a new pacemaker defibrillator, and his meds changed. .. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Judith S

November 28, 2017 at 11:23 AM

Back to wish you congratulations on your win BW!!

Silent One

November 28, 2017 at 9:18 AM

I liked your take on the contest, what would we do without these doctors who regularly save lives.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Christopher Flaherty

November 24, 2017 at 6:51 PM

Shame the only Heroes now day's are the Super Hero Marvel Comic 1. The real 1 are taken for granted sadly . Fireman . Policeman and Doctor man don't have much of ring to them do they. Sad who you gonna call Comic Con

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2017 at 3:28 PM

Oh this is wonderful. We ALL need a Dr. McDreamy in our lives!! I wrote of Lincoln (if I ever get it posted. Were he alive in my time, I would have wanted to date that guy!!)

Ravi Sathasivam

November 23, 2017 at 2:54 AM

Excellent. Very inspiring write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Kim Rodrigues

November 22, 2017 at 7:47 PM

Wonderful words!

Judith S

November 22, 2017 at 12:46 PM

What a beautifully inspired write BW! I didn't realize you had been through this. You must appreciate life so much more! I can certainly see how this doctor well deserves your hero title! Best of luck in the contest!! ~ Judy