My Blood Undenied

My blood undenied; Though a red lip; Yet a significant figure; We are oceans apart; Waiting to confluence; This caused by sources religious view apart; Which I hear will later confluence; No response lie in wait; When all the wishes of the sources; Arrive at their door step when they least expect it; This you tell me in silence; that the blood undenied will find it's blood; I trust you; The blood of my blood that must blood; ....My blood undenied

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2013 5:40:00 PM

Prince, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**

Damilola Olaniyi

Date: 4/25/2013 2:06:00 PM

welcome to the community! i like the flow whats it about though?

Prince Ifeoluwa Daniel Shanu-Olu
Date: 4/25/2013 6:42:00 PM

About my daughter that is deprived of the knowledge of her father because her maternal grandparents are muslims and they dont want her to be a christain. However my daughter as small as she is tells me in my dreams that she will come back to me at the appointed time

Skat A

Date: 4/16/2013 5:26:00 PM

Prince :-), Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

Prince Ifeoluwa Daniel Shanu-Olu
Date: 4/25/2013 6:43:00 PM

Tanks dear