My Bliss, My Kiss

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1/9/2025 for A Personal Valentine Poetry Contest sponsored by Suzette Richards

Note: the first five lines of this phoenix sixain are from my poem Sweet Peas and Periwinkle on PoetrySoup. Won't you join me in my garden? I'll plant periwinkle bliss. Won't you join me in my garden? Then you can plant a kiss. I love you. I love you. I do. I do. My bliss, my kiss, you.

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/9/2025 9:54:00 PM

Very romantic verse David, best of luck in the contest. Tom

David Crandall
Date: 1/10/2025 9:03:00 AM

Thanks Tom!