My Birthday Suit

My birthday suit is with me each day I take it with me where ever I go Some times it’s covered, but not when I play Some times it’s bare, but not on public show. My birthday suit needs a lift things hang low But exercise helped in this month of May I think I should show it, what do you say? But perhaps not, it has now lost its shine For an iron free suit is what I did pray But my prayers were not answered, well not this time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/3/2012 9:31:00 AM
MMMMMmmmmmm, good poem, worthy winner...
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Date: 5/12/2012 7:17:00 AM
I love how it flows, a very great one. I liked it before, like it now! Congrats, dear :)
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Date: 5/12/2012 7:19:00 AM
Awh thanks Dinda I appreciate your lovely words xx
Date: 5/11/2012 7:58:00 PM
I really liked yours alot. Congrats. I'd put it even higher!!!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/12/2012 3:16:00 AM
Too kind Andy, I wish things were placed higher as well ha ha, you get my drift, which is south by the way xx
Date: 5/11/2012 7:56:00 PM
This IS brilliant Mandy!Congrats on your win!!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/12/2012 3:14:00 AM
Thank you kash that word brilliant is soothing too and lifting my heart and ego bless you my friend xx
Date: 5/11/2012 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "Your Birthday Suit" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2012 6:49:00 AM
As for me, yours was the most enjoyable one, Mandy, spiced up as it were with Andea's comments and Mandy's response..I have not laughed like this for a long while now. Congrats and Thnx a lot, friend, Jag
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/11/2012 7:01:00 AM
Why thank you jag, you may have noticed by now I try not to take life too seriously even though it is , I am so happy to have made you laugh and thank you for taking the time to comment as well as read. Your new friend Mandy
Date: 5/11/2012 3:06:00 AM
Mandy congrats on your win..David
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/11/2012 5:22:00 AM
Thanks david .xx
Date: 5/10/2012 9:37:00 PM
hahaha, GREAT job with this one. BTW, you say it's NOT covered when you play. hmmmm. is that the only kind of play you know? hahaha.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/11/2012 2:03:00 AM
Yes too right you can do it lying down Ha ha I had a deprived childhood xx
Date: 5/9/2012 2:09:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this afternoon Mandy. Hope you have a great day. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2012 9:11:00 AM
Smile ˜ "Happy Birthday To You, Happy Birthday To You, Happy Birthday Sweeet Baby * Happy Birthday To Youuuu, My Love, 'Forever;'" John!:) ˜
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/9/2012 10:31:00 AM
Thank you John xx
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