Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Poet Dizain

My Birthday Suit

 My birthday suit is with me each day
  I take it with me where ever I go
 Some times it’s covered, but not when I play
Some times it’s bare, but not on public show.
My birthday suit needs a lift things hang low

But exercise helped in this month of May
I think I should show it, what do you say?
But perhaps not, it has now lost its shine
For an iron free suit is what I did pray
But my prayers were not answered, well not this time 

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Harry Horsman November 3, 2012 at 9:31 AM MMMMMmmmmmm, good poem, worthy winner...

Dinda Minardi May 12, 2012 at 7:17 AM I love how it flows, a very great one. I liked it before, like it now! Congrats, dear :) Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 12, 2012 at 7:19 AM Awh thanks Dinda I appreciate your lovely words xx

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2012 at 7:58 PM I really liked yours alot. Congrats. I'd put it even higher!!! Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 12, 2012 at 3:16 AM Too kind Andy, I wish things were placed higher as well ha ha, you get my drift, which is south by the way xx

Kash Poet May 11, 2012 at 7:56 PM This IS brilliant Mandy!Congrats on your win!! Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 12, 2012 at 3:14 AM Thank you kash that word brilliant is soothing too and lifting my heart and ego bless you my friend xx

Carol Sunshine Brown May 11, 2012 at 7:29 AM Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "Your Birthday Suit" contest Mandy. Love, Carol

S.Jagathsimhan Nair May 11, 2012 at 6:49 AM As for me, yours was the most enjoyable one, Mandy, spiced up as it were with Andea's comments and Mandy's response..I have not laughed like this for a long while now. Congrats and Thnx a lot, friend, Jag Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 11, 2012 at 7:01 AM Why thank you jag, you may have noticed by now I try not to take life too seriously even though it is , I am so happy to have made you laugh and thank you for taking the time to comment as well as read. Your new friend Mandy

David Williams May 11, 2012 at 3:06 AM Mandy congrats on your win..David Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 11, 2012 at 5:22 AM Thanks david .xx

Andrea Dietrich May 10, 2012 at 9:37 PM hahaha, GREAT job with this one. BTW, you say it's NOT covered when you play. hmmmm. is that the only kind of play you know? hahaha. Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 11, 2012 at 2:03 AM Yes too right you can do it lying down Ha ha I had a deprived childhood xx

Carol Sunshine Brown May 9, 2012 at 2:09 PM I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this afternoon Mandy. Hope you have a great day. Love, Carol

John Rhinem May 9, 2012 at 9:11 AM Smile ˜ "Happy Birthday To You, Happy Birthday To You, Happy Birthday Sweeet Baby * Happy Birthday To Youuuu, My Love, 'Forever;'" John!:) ˜ Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 9, 2012 at 10:31 AM Thank you John xx