My Birthday Suit

My birthday suit is with me each day I take it with me where ever I go Some times it’s covered, but not when I play Some times it’s bare, but not on public show. My birthday suit needs a lift things hang low But exercise helped in this month of May I think I should show it, what do you say? But perhaps not, it has now lost its shine For an iron free suit is what I did pray But my prayers were not answered, well not this time

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Harry Horsman

Date: 11/3/2012 9:31:00 AM

MMMMMmmmmmm, good poem, worthy winner...

Dinda Minardi

Date: 5/12/2012 7:17:00 AM

I love how it flows, a very great one. I liked it before, like it now! Congrats, dear :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/12/2012 7:19:00 AM

Awh thanks Dinda I appreciate your lovely words xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2012 7:58:00 PM

I really liked yours alot. Congrats. I'd put it even higher!!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/12/2012 3:16:00 AM

Too kind Andy, I wish things were placed higher as well ha ha, you get my drift, which is south by the way xx

Kash Poet

Date: 5/11/2012 7:56:00 PM

This IS brilliant Mandy!Congrats on your win!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/12/2012 3:14:00 AM

Thank you kash that word brilliant is soothing too and lifting my heart and ego bless you my friend xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/11/2012 7:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "Your Birthday Suit" contest Mandy. Love, Carol

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 5/11/2012 6:49:00 AM

As for me, yours was the most enjoyable one, Mandy, spiced up as it were with Andea's comments and Mandy's response..I have not laughed like this for a long while now. Congrats and Thnx a lot, friend, Jag

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/11/2012 7:01:00 AM

Why thank you jag, you may have noticed by now I try not to take life too seriously even though it is , I am so happy to have made you laugh and thank you for taking the time to comment as well as read. Your new friend Mandy