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My attempt at song lyrics with Alisa Balaieva

My Birdsong

verse
Eternity is nothing
When I’m with you
I give you the flowers
Of youth, happiness
The magical spell
Sounds simply “love you”
We don’t need the time
Being beyond the space

chorus
The magic in our hearts
Between our hands
You are my beginning
And my end
I want to pull you closer
And hide from the world
Singing for you like a bird

verse
Infinity is nothing
When you are with me
You give me the rays
of glory and beauty
You leave me breathless
at peace in your embrace
Sweet sensual whispers
Only heard by me

chorus
The magic in our hearts
Between our hands
You are my beginning
And my end
I want to pull you closer
And hide from the world
Singing for you like a bird

Bridge
Our ink could not romanticize
until the first glance of our eyes
Blank pages of our love story
are now written with stardust

chorus
The magic in our hearts
Between our hands
You are my beginning
And my end
I want to pull you closer
And hide from the world
Singing for you like a bird

Silent One collaboration with Alisa Balaieva
23 November 2020

A young musician & poet from Ukraine

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Herrick Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 10:31 PM
I can think of quite a few singers who would do splendidly with this gem.
Zahid Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Wow!
James Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 3:31 PM
Beautiful indeed, would love to hear this to music, wonderfully crafted together, Emilia : )
Laurie Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 8:47 PM
Hello Silent One … certainly a sweet romantic lyric set indeed - thank you SO - Lindsay
One Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Thank you
Edmonds  Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 7:11 PM
That’s a beautiful birdsong, lyrics written by you and Alisa, I’d also love to hear it put to music... regards, Belle
One Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 4:18 AM
Thank you..
Samin Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 6:34 PM
What's left is the music.
One Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 4:18 AM
Yeah...
Watt Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 12:44 AM
Very lovely and romantic. I especially liked "Blank pages of our love story are now written with stardust". This is magical.
One Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 8:38 AM
Thank you..
Adu-Boffour Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 11:50 PM
wow!!! are you going to produce it as a song?
Adu-Boffour Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 12:06 AM
cool
One Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 8:38 AM
Thank you.. Alisa is going to produce it hopefully
Raiser Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 5:39 PM
Beautiful ballad you two
One Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 8:37 AM
Thank you..
Messina Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 5:24 PM
Now this is the kind of tweet I like to read... Nice collaboration!
One Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 8:37 AM
Thank you..
Adams Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 4:02 PM
I know nothing about lyrics but i can say this is a beautiful poem, very well collaborated! Bravo to you both! love this... :) hugs
One Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 8:37 AM
Thank you.. I dont know much about lyrics either lol
Canerdy Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 12:17 PM
S.O., the two of you have done a wonderful collaboration--so descriptive and romantic! Janice
One Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 8:37 AM
Thank you..
Crabtree Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 10:30 AM
I like this, Silent One. You did well in your collaboration with Alisa. :)
One Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 8:37 AM
Thank you..
Proxenos Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 4:53 AM
I simply Love this poem. Well done to both of you. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
One Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 8:36 AM
Thank you..
Nicole Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 9:01 PM
This is so beautiful and uplifting. Music takes the heart beyond the sky. The melody lingers on and on. :) Brandy
One Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 1:46 AM
Thank you..
Buehler Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 9:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful and romantic! An amazing song. :)
One Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 1:46 AM
Thank you..
Rose  Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 7:06 PM
This is so wonderful, all it needs is a musician to put music to it, I'd love to hear it played on the air, you never know, its a beaut !
One Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 1:46 AM
Thank you.. Alisa will sort that out.
Eslinger Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 3:24 PM
Splendid! Without the instrumentation, it still sang to me. Lovely, sensual imagery. P.s. thanks for your comments on my poems. I don’t know what to click to respond to comments aargh.
One Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 1:46 AM
Thank you.. There is a reply button underneath the comment and you select that and write your reply. Hope that helps.
Fenn Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 1:25 PM
One cool love poem!
One Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 1:45 AM
Thank you..
May Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 11:17 AM
Beautiful lyrics Silent, best wishes
One Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 1:15 PM
Thank you..
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 10:11 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Has it been put to music?
One Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 1:15 PM
Thank you.. no not yet.
Munot  Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 9:53 AM
You have tried something new..I love the lyrics .I can't wait to hear when it comes live ... you say it is not good this is awesome . Nice attempt , Silent One .
One Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Thank you..
Buhagiar Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 9:48 AM
There is magic in this love song. So well constructed that I read it twice. Excellent ~~
One Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Thank you..
Kazi Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 9:45 AM
the poem is v.nice you have chosen v. diff words in it.loved it
One Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Thank you..
Hamilton Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 8:31 AM
Well done SO, now why would you say it's not that good, very bold to attempt a lyric especially with a bridge in it, now that's pretty advanced stuff!
One Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Thank you.. first time for both of us
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