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My attempt at song lyrics with Alisa Balaieva

verse Eternity is nothing When I’m with you I give you the flowers Of youth, happiness The magical spell Sounds simply “love you” We don’t need the time Being beyond the space chorus The magic in our hearts Between our hands You are my beginning And my end I want to pull you closer And hide from the world Singing for you like a bird verse Infinity is nothing When you are with me You give me the rays of glory and beauty You leave me breathless at peace in your embrace Sweet sensual whispers Only heard by me chorus The magic in our hearts Between our hands You are my beginning And my end I want to pull you closer And hide from the world Singing for you like a bird Bridge Our ink could not romanticize until the first glance of our eyes Blank pages of our love story are now written with stardust chorus The magic in our hearts Between our hands You are my beginning And my end I want to pull you closer And hide from the world Singing for you like a bird Silent One collaboration with Alisa Balaieva 23 November 2020 A young musician & poet from Ukraine https://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet.aspx?ID=81095

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Date: 11/24/2023 10:31:00 PM
I can think of quite a few singers who would do splendidly with this gem.
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Date: 12/2/2020 10:15:00 AM
Wow!
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Date: 12/1/2020 3:31:00 PM
Beautiful indeed, would love to hear this to music, wonderfully crafted together, Emilia : )
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Date: 11/27/2020 8:47:00 PM
Hello Silent One … certainly a sweet romantic lyric set indeed - thank you SO - Lindsay
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Silent One
Date: 11/28/2020 9:00:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 11/25/2020 7:11:00 PM
That’s a beautiful birdsong, lyrics written by you and Alisa, I’d also love to hear it put to music... regards, Belle
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Silent One
Date: 11/26/2020 4:18:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/25/2020 6:34:00 PM
What's left is the music.
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Silent One
Date: 11/26/2020 4:18:00 AM
Yeah...
Date: 11/25/2020 12:44:00 AM
Very lovely and romantic. I especially liked "Blank pages of our love story are now written with stardust". This is magical.
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Silent One
Date: 11/25/2020 8:38:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/24/2020 11:50:00 PM
wow!!! are you going to produce it as a song?
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Kingsley Adu-Boffour
Date: 11/30/2020 12:06:00 AM
cool
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Silent One
Date: 11/25/2020 8:38:00 AM
Thank you.. Alisa is going to produce it hopefully
Date: 11/24/2020 5:39:00 PM
Beautiful ballad you two
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Silent One
Date: 11/25/2020 8:37:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/24/2020 5:24:00 PM
Now this is the kind of tweet I like to read... Nice collaboration!
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Silent One
Date: 11/25/2020 8:37:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/24/2020 4:02:00 PM
I know nothing about lyrics but i can say this is a beautiful poem, very well collaborated! Bravo to you both! love this... :) hugs
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Silent One
Date: 11/25/2020 8:37:00 AM
Thank you.. I dont know much about lyrics either lol
Date: 11/24/2020 12:17:00 PM
S.O., the two of you have done a wonderful collaboration--so descriptive and romantic! Janice
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Silent One
Date: 11/25/2020 8:37:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/24/2020 10:30:00 AM
I like this, Silent One. You did well in your collaboration with Alisa. :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/25/2020 8:37:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/24/2020 4:53:00 AM
I simply Love this poem. Well done to both of you. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Silent One
Date: 11/25/2020 8:36:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/23/2020 9:01:00 PM
This is so beautiful and uplifting. Music takes the heart beyond the sky. The melody lingers on and on. :) Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 11/24/2020 1:46:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/23/2020 9:00:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful and romantic! An amazing song. :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/24/2020 1:46:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/23/2020 7:06:00 PM
This is so wonderful, all it needs is a musician to put music to it, I'd love to hear it played on the air, you never know, its a beaut !
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Silent One
Date: 11/24/2020 1:46:00 AM
Thank you.. Alisa will sort that out.
Date: 11/23/2020 3:24:00 PM
Splendid! Without the instrumentation, it still sang to me. Lovely, sensual imagery. P.s. thanks for your comments on my poems. I don’t know what to click to respond to comments aargh.
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Silent One
Date: 11/24/2020 1:46:00 AM
Thank you.. There is a reply button underneath the comment and you select that and write your reply. Hope that helps.
Date: 11/23/2020 1:25:00 PM
One cool love poem!
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Silent One
Date: 11/24/2020 1:45:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/23/2020 11:17:00 AM
Beautiful lyrics Silent, best wishes
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2020 1:15:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 11/23/2020 10:11:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Has it been put to music?
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2020 1:15:00 PM
Thank you.. no not yet.
Date: 11/23/2020 9:53:00 AM
You have tried something new..I love the lyrics .I can't wait to hear when it comes live ... you say it is not good this is awesome . Nice attempt , Silent One .
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2020 1:14:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 11/23/2020 9:48:00 AM
There is magic in this love song. So well constructed that I read it twice. Excellent ~~
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2020 1:14:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 11/23/2020 9:45:00 AM
the poem is v.nice you have chosen v. diff words in it.loved it
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2020 1:14:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 11/23/2020 9:15:00 AM
I can see this in a Niall Horan song. With a very soft melody. Very pretty
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2020 1:14:00 PM
Thank you..
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