Charlize Pretorius Poet ABC

My Biggest Dream

You are my biggest dream
You are the one I need

I dream of us together
Dashing through the cold I ice-y weather
You hold me tight. You make me warm
For you I'd run through a snowstorm

When I look into your eyes
I see the fragile soul inside
But never the less you always smile

Your laugh, rarest of all
Is like music to my ears
I hope we stay together for all our years

I dream of you
I dream of me
I dream of us in a fantasy
But now I need it to become reality

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Poet Destroyer A June 30, 2015 at 5:22 PM Charlize, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A June 29, 2015 at 11:44 PM Charlize, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Tim Smith June 29, 2015 at 1:45 PM A nice poem of hope and longing. I hope your dream comes true...Tim