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I came in a tattered old box, the grand size of a man's shoebox. I knew that I was unwanted, around a big empty house I wandered. On a drive in the country one day, these people said I was cute and took me away. But, the novelty of a kitten wore off quickly, I ran and jumped and was just too wiggly. So, they gave me to this girl who likes cats, well, here I am sweet girl, congrats! She opened the lid slowly and peeked inside, I was so scared my meow was tongue-tied. Hello beautiful, she said- but I was frozen, my kitten spirit had been broken! In the next days things were happening, around her apartment I was galloping. I had new toys, like squeaky mice and balls, and I would come when I heard her calls. There were pretty food dishes and a brush, my fur she would tame whispering, hush-hush. But, the sweetest was being on her lap, purring, purring, purring during a sweet cat nap. The best thing that ever happened to me, is finding my forever home with this girl of glee! She does not care that I am too fluffy, that I have no manners and can be scruffy. She cares little that I like to scratch things, from a cat tree this kitty now clings and springs! She says she adores me to pieces, whispers that she loves my big blue peepers; and I sure love this girl- to pieces and pieces. ___________________________ September 3, 2018 Poetry/Personification/My Big Blue Peepers Copyright Protected, ID 18-1057-890-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Personification of a pet, Wild Animal or Insect sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Theme chosen - pet cat Second Place

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Date: 9/28/2018 8:19:00 PM
So sweet, Dear Heart. A delightful read. Congrats on your podium win.
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Date: 9/17/2018 9:17:00 AM
Thank you Connie and Charles for the congrats and comments, so appreciated ~
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Date: 9/9/2018 5:25:00 AM
All the cats I have ever owned have been rescue cats. Wonderful story and great story Constance. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/4/2018 3:35:00 PM
How wonderful that this is a true story and you gave this sweet unwanted cat a home. Congratulations on your well deserved second placement Constance.: )
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Date: 9/4/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thank you Tania for the contest and for my awesome win and thanks Dean for your visit and comment, appreciate ~
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Date: 9/4/2018 1:17:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem. So fun and happy. Pets make all the difference in the world to me. You are blessed to have each other!
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Date: 9/4/2018 11:13:00 AM
Loved this, what a beautiful poem, I am also a cat lover and could relate, my three cats are all rescue cats. Congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Date: 9/3/2018 9:40:00 AM
Chris, thank you for visiting my poem, people who know me, know I would never turn away a cat, if I cannot keep them, I will find them a forever home, but this one I kept.
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Date: 9/3/2018 9:34:00 AM
This was cute and happy. It is wonderful this cat found a home where love is abundant. Nicely done and much luck in the contest
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