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My Big Blue Peepers

I came in a tattered old box,
the grand size of a man's shoebox.
I knew that I was unwanted,
around a big empty house I wandered.
On a drive in the country one day,
these people said I was cute and took me away.
But, the novelty of a kitten wore off quickly,
I ran and jumped and was just too wiggly.
So, they gave me to this girl who likes cats,
well, here I am sweet girl, congrats!
She opened the lid slowly and peeked inside,
I was so scared my meow was tongue-tied.
Hello beautiful, she said-  but I was frozen,
my kitten spirit had been broken!
In the next days things were happening,
around her apartment I was galloping.
I had new toys, like squeaky mice and balls,
and I would come when I heard her calls.
There were pretty food dishes and a brush,
my fur she would tame whispering,  hush-hush.
But, the sweetest was being on her lap,
purring, purring, purring during a sweet cat nap.
The best thing that ever happened to me,
is finding my forever home with this girl of glee!
She does not care that I am too fluffy,
that I have no manners and can be scruffy.
She cares little that I like to scratch things,
from a cat tree this kitty now clings and springs!
She says she adores me to pieces,
whispers that she loves my big blue peepers;
     and I sure love this girl-   to pieces and pieces.

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September 3, 2018


Poetry/Personification/My Big Blue Peepers
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1057-890-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Personification of a pet, Wild Animal or Insect
sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Theme chosen - pet cat

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 8:19 PM
So sweet, Dear Heart. A delightful read. Congrats on your podium win.
La France Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 9:17 AM
Thank you Connie and Charles for the congrats and comments, so appreciated ~
Messina Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 5:25 AM
All the cats I have ever owned have been rescue cats. Wonderful story and great story Constance. Congrats on your win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 3:35 PM
How wonderful that this is a true story and you gave this sweet unwanted cat a home. Congratulations on your well deserved second placement Constance.: )
La France Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Thank you Tania for the contest and for my awesome win and thanks Dean for your visit and comment, appreciate ~
Wood Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 1:17 PM
I really enjoyed this poem. So fun and happy. Pets make all the difference in the world to me. You are blessed to have each other!
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 11:13 AM
Loved this, what a beautiful poem, I am also a cat lover and could relate, my three cats are all rescue cats. Congratulations on your win in the contest!
La France Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 9:40 AM
Chris, thank you for visiting my poem, people who know me, know I would never turn away a cat, if I cannot keep them, I will find them a forever home, but this one I kept.
Green Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 9:34 AM
This was cute and happy. It is wonderful this cat found a home where love is abundant. Nicely done and much luck in the contest
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