My Big Bang Theory - Nighttime Musing

Envy devoured me as I witness the wind,
Caressing her milky complexion,
Gently blowing the hair off those defined rosy skin,
Revealing Stargates into Heaven,

Within the depths, finding warmth pouts and sultry smiles,
The smell of home flooded my memories,
Every touch and movements pausing the dials,
A stellar conquest of sublime mysteries.

Into being, I submerged in an infinite darkness,
An explosion illuminating the void, creating my Universe.

9th December 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Yusoff Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 8:46 PM
Thank you so much for all the comments! I am ever grateful for having the opportunity to have my pieces read and appreciated. Much love to all! Happy New Year and have a great 2016!
Inman Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 9:14 AM
Lovely Fariq.
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December 29, 2015 at 6:02 PM
FARIQ, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 5:24 PM
EXPLOSIVE!! Congrats on a bang-up job here, Fariq!!
A. Sharma Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 1:13 AM
Very lovely Fariq.. congrats on great win!
Gentry Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 7:55 PM
Congratulations on winning 2nd place!
Wigley Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 7:20 PM
A lovely piece, well done, Fariq. Regards, Viv
Tor Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 6:01 PM
Fariq beautiful and cleve. Congratulations!
Lawless Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Best definition of "SMITTEN" ever. Well deserved placement in the contest Fariq. Love the final couplet
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 1:01 PM
Love the title and the sensual imagery Fariq:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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