Freddie Robinson Jr. Poet Lyric

My Better Half

The spirit of the woman I love
has changed me, this I do know
The sheer force of her femininity
has made me a better man, absolutely so
She engages me with godly dialog,
it helps elevate my consciousness
She's the woman I've always desired,
who truly makes me feel blessed

She's my better half
Lord knows, she is the best
She completes my identity,
I love her unconditionally, I confess

The spirit of the man I love
is so amazing, this I do feel
He loved me in spite of my
brokenness
God has blessed me from above,
with this man's love I'm now healed
He caresses my heart like a dove's sigh,
with such gentle tenderness

He's my better half
God knit our hearts together
He completes me so in every way,
I'm  his soul mate and lover forever


This was written in collaboration with Alexis Y.
Her poetic voice helped inspire this work of art

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Patrice Trice Jackson November 8, 2016 at 10:09 AM I love this poem...

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2016 at 3:35 PM this is really nice what you did with Alexis. You are both so talented and complement each other completely!

Janis Medders Tobechi November 1, 2016 at 2:23 AM It resembles the lyrics to a song. It would make a beautiful song. Well written collaboration. Freddie Robinson Jr. November 1, 2016 at 6:43 AM Ty, Janis. I really do appreciate the loving words you gave us. Much love to you and yours. RW

Cheryl Hoffman October 31, 2016 at 8:48 PM Very nice collab poem you guys! P & L~Che Freddie Robinson Jr. October 31, 2016 at 10:29 PM Ty, Cheryl. I had such a good time working w/Alexis. I loved every minute of it. Appreciate the nice comment. Love always to you, dear. RW

White Wolf October 31, 2016 at 8:22 PM This is an awesome collaboration RW. Keep up the good work my friend. Freddie Robinson Jr. October 31, 2016 at 10:28 PM Ty, Rick. It was a thoroughly enjoyable venture. She is awesome to work with. Love you, bruh.

Freddie Robinson Jr. October 31, 2016 at 7:24 PM Ty, Alexis for the time and effort given to make this poem the romantic gem I believe it is. You are an exceptionally talented poetess. I am honored to have been able to work w/you on this lovely poem. Many blessings to you. More love always. RW Alexis Y. October 31, 2016 at 7:40 PM Hi Freddie, It was my pleasure to write such a beautiful and romantic piece with you. You are a remarkable poet .I am honored to have collaborated with you as well.I loved the end result. :-)Alexis