My Bestfriend

She is all I have ever asked, a bestfriend.
Her eyes look straight through my heart, 
with just a look at me she understands what I'm thinking of.
She is like the wind that pulls me foward.
She can make me laugh even in the darkest of all days.
She is all I have ever asked, a bestfriend, and she finally came to me, 
an angel in the fog.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/18/2013 7:49:00 AM
Very good this angel in the fog!
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Date: 3/8/2013 10:49:00 AM
awesome poem friend Margherita. Yes all of us have a best friend who will always at our side no matter what happen. a God's gift :) thanks for sharing
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Date: 3/8/2013 7:27:00 AM
When we read your poetry we feel we're there with you. Like we're a part of your fiends listening. You have talent. Make a comment on one of my poems and I'll have an easy way to to back to read yours... To read ours click on the name below the avatar. You'll go to our site.
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Date: 3/7/2013 4:59:00 PM
May you both sail forever on those winds of friendship.
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Date: 2/17/2013 12:00:00 AM
Wow! I extremely love this poem and the image of a best friend you've perfectly described here my dearest sweet Marg. Best friends are hard to find but I hope I've already found one. ;)) Great write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing with us and keep up the good work my dear! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/8/2013 2:59:00 PM
A very touching and insightful write, Margherita...I especially like the second and fourth lines and LOVE the the last line, comparing her to a shining light in the mist...Please keep writing and I will keep reading - Tim
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Date: 2/8/2013 6:12:00 AM
Complimenti Margherita! Ci vuole coraggio a scrivere una poesia non nella lingua madre. Un bellissimo pensiero. Saluti, Roy
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Margherita Russo
Date: 2/11/2013 5:21:00 AM
Grazie mille Roy!
Date: 2/4/2013 7:37:00 AM
You know so well the bonds that tie true friends.
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Date: 2/3/2013 1:41:00 PM
Well done lovely xx
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Date: 2/2/2013 9:27:00 AM
Absolutely what a best friend should be..and how you should find her....in the night of day....nice write...Holly Moore
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Date: 1/31/2013 10:02:00 AM
So nice to have best friends and you convey this in your poem. Well done. love phyl
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Date: 1/31/2013 9:37:00 AM
wonderful poetry,, a joy to read
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Date: 1/31/2013 2:40:00 AM
Awesome write Margherita! The value of friendship cannot be measured - friends are the balm that keeps us sane in this world. You've said it best. Very nice! Keep penning and we'll keep reading!
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Date: 1/31/2013 2:05:00 AM
Margherita I like the metaphor in this one, good dedication to your friend....David
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Date: 1/30/2013 10:57:00 PM
This is adorable. You must be the best of the best!
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Date: 1/30/2013 8:06:00 PM
This is a very nice poem, for a bst friend. We all ne4ed a best fiend. I have one That we have been friends for many many years. If you don't mind - I love friendship poems. Please check out ( Letter To A Friend ) Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Lucilla
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Margherita Russo
Date: 1/31/2013 2:21:00 PM
Yes, its good to have a best friend and have someone to talk to! I like friendship poems too and then to dedicate to my friend :) Yes ill read it! Margie
Date: 1/30/2013 7:26:00 PM
Hello MR I am very pleased to read a poem about a best friend. Compliments to you on a dear subject...well presented
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Date: 1/30/2013 6:57:00 PM
Another gorgeous write from you!! Keep them coming! :)
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Date: 1/30/2013 6:12:00 PM
i like the personification of the wind pulling you forward. Good metaphors slide in unnoticed and invoke the feeling you want exrpessed without flat out saying it. You have good instincts, good job.
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Margherita Russo
Date: 1/31/2013 2:24:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comment Tara ;)
Date: 1/30/2013 5:24:00 PM
Another beautiful poem dear. Just remember to return to your best friend all she does for you... Blessings
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Margherita Russo
Date: 1/31/2013 2:25:00 PM
Yes, she the best friend of all, and I am for her! thank you!
Date: 1/30/2013 5:04:00 PM
Very good. An outstanding job, and I want you to keep writing because the world needs poets like you. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/30/2013 3:30:00 PM
Margherita a beautiful poem written. An angel in the fog..angels are dependable when you need to talk. They're great listeners. Thanks for sharing. Warm Smiles Always, Connie
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Date: 1/30/2013 2:52:00 PM
that s what bestfriends are..angels.Very beautiful.Welcome to ps
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Date: 1/30/2013 2:48:00 PM
This is excellent and beautiful too, Magherita! I'm glad you have a best friend...every girl should have one, especially one that lifts you up and inspire you to be your best! Great job and I'll go read another. By the way, it was Sean who referred your work to me. Have a good day! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/30/2013 2:28:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful, my dear friend... straight from the heart! Hugs, Jack
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