My Best Friend

A special poem for my friend Hannah

I don t really have friends
but you re one of them I have
you ve given me confidence, instead of my own dad
there s colour, happiness everywhere
when you re near
this world seems like heaven
I chat with you everyday from seven to eleven
you re even better than my friend kevin

I met you when it seems like everything is finish
but with your presence my this thought is diminish 
you re neither pakistani nor a British
but still you ve reduced my anguish
by becoming the best friend anyone can have
by totally finishing my pain
bringing happiness in the form of rain

you ve six brothers
alway ready to beat me when I do any type of trouble
which is related to you
like breaking your heart,stopping you from dance or art
but tell them i ll never do something like that
because I don t want to end up in dark

May you always remain happy
tell me if you like teddy(stuffed animal)
don t ever let someone call you nerdy(someone who studies alot)
always remain in your life ready
because you never knew what s coming
apart from dancing do you like drumming?

you ve a face which is very pleasant and fair
I believe you have red hairs
but these are things which I really didn t care
the things which matters is that you re so nice
nobody can buy friendship with a price
isn t it right?

hey Hannah promise me that you ll always be a nice friend of mine
always give me confidence like previous night
hey let s promise that we ll never ever have a fight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/18/2022 12:09:00 AM
Nicely written. :)
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Date: 4/9/2018 3:33:00 AM
Lovely poem.
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Date: 8/1/2017 12:18:00 PM
Ah this is lovely, hehe, poor Kevin ?? I had to chuckle
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Date: 7/23/2017 5:50:00 AM
Friendship is awesome thing. You're very lucky having such friend as Hannah.And your words about her are pretty. Well-done.
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Date: 7/20/2017 11:11:00 AM
Lovely words. Friendship is so precious and to treasure. Keep writing, as you write from your heart and that is a sign of a good poet. take care. Jackie
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Date: 7/8/2017 6:59:00 AM
indeed! nobody can buy friendship with a price. very nice poem. a friend is a very precious gem that you should treasure...
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Date: 6/29/2017 4:51:00 AM
A lovely poem dedicated to your friend. Well done.
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Date: 6/28/2017 11:43:00 AM
Hi hope God bless this type of friendship. You given a wonderful tribute to true friendship. Well done. :)
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Date: 6/28/2017 4:24:00 AM
Hey, this is so sweet! Your friend Hannah is lucky to have you. In fact, both of you are lucky to have such friendship!
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Date: 6/27/2017 3:46:00 PM
aww this poem is so sweat I really like reading this <3
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Date: 6/25/2017 8:30:00 AM
A wonderful poem this is. Enjoyed reading.
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Date: 6/23/2017 11:39:00 PM
"nobody can buy friendship with a price" => i love all the lines in your poem.but this would be my favorite. keep writing!
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Date: 6/23/2017 4:47:00 PM
okay..Sara
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