My Best Friend

I always thought of a word I would use to refer to him,
for he was more than a brother to me.
We talked about space and mysteries for hours.
We went for long walks.
We shared our fears, hopes and dreams.
We joined many clubs in campus heydays.....
One day, our communication was cut;
I couldn't tell whether it was I or him
who had a problem, or wanted time alone to reflect
and meditate about life or oneself.
No phonecall,
No SMS,
No WhatsApp,
No Facebook,
No meeting in town....
The friend I knew disappeared like Atlantis,
only for me to tell people how he was good,
and how he looked like. People keenly listen
to my narrations, as though he was a legend
past gone eons back.
A brotherhood I thought was real and meaningful,
disappeared into the mist of mystery.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Sadly it happens to us all and we lose touch with people they simply disappear from sight - its happened to me with good friends on soup:-( Congrats on your win Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 5:07 PM
I'm glad I'm not alone in this. Sorry it happened to you also, Jan.... :( Thank you for your kind applause!! *^_^*
Nusker Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 12:05 PM
A fantastic thought out writing. Congrats on your win, Teddy.
Kimathi Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 5:03 PM
Hi Afzal. Thank you so much for your kind applause!! *^_^*
Gupta Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 4:41 AM
Beautifully told and ended with a tender touch of poetry ...
Kimathi Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 5:27 AM
Thank you so much Probir, for your warm applause, and continuous morale support!!! ;-)
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