My Best Friend

On my bed
I watch her steady breathing
I slowly lean over and whisper
“Lilia, wake up.”
She turns her head
“What is it Carolynn?”
“It’s Time to go.”
I pull her up 
We slowly get dressed
Packing bags full of 
Everything we’ll need.
I kiss her harshly on
The lips and say
“Let’s go”
We slowly creep
Down the stairs 
Into the basement 
Past my brother 
To the door.
I tightly hold
Lilia’s sweaty small hand
I crack the door
Cold wind rushes in on me.
I turn to make sure 
The cold hasn’t
Awoken my brother.
I push Lilia
Out into the dark
And quickly 
After her
I turn to slide the 
Door shut.
Before I shut it
All the way
I whisper 
“I’ll miss you,
Will you miss us?”

We start to walk 
Each step easier
Then the last
We don’t speak much
A question here
A kiss there
We’ve had this planned 
 For months
We would runaway together 
Cause no one could understand 
How strong
Our love is
We finally did it
I couldn’t believe it happened
I turned to her
“I love you Lilia.”
“I love you Carolynn.”
I grabbed her hand
And began 
To run.
We ran all the way
To a pay phone 
Called a cab
Drove for two hours
We pulled over 
I paid the driver
We got out
Lilia pulled me into 
The woods.
We walked to a clearing
It was by a slow running 
River
“Perfect” We coursed 
We gather are selves together to 
Prepare for our 
Little act
We have decided 
To nap for a while
I know this is right

As we awake 
I know it’s time
“Ready?”
Lilia asks
I respond with a kiss 
We grab our objects out
Of our bag.
We wade into the water
I take the razor
And she takes hers
We run it down our wrist 
As the
Blood runs wild
I whisper
“I love you”
And my last thought is
I know 
	This is
		Right

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/2/2012 6:11:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Taylor. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2012 11:42:00 AM
A serious poem written Taylor. - oxox Anne-Lise
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