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Peanut is 14 years old

Peanut a silvery bluey, pale blond, long hair Yorkie Short waggy tail, floppy ears, brandy brown eyes That melts your heart with his elegance. He was supposed to be a petite five pounds Pup, but by the age of five he became a porky. I was told Mother Nature is full of surprises. He has a mind of his own, “Stubborn,” true to his nature. On our walks in the morn, if he’s done, he’s done. He sits in the middle of the road and won’t budge; he’s won. He’ll nip at my toes to let me know his done. It’s embarrassing. I pick him up and carry him home. When we get close, I put him down, to the front door he runs. He loves a delightful back massage or a good belly rub Or the back of his ears scratched. He doesn’t like the tub, He knows what comes next, and don’t leave him alone. He's a part of the family that has won our heart with tons Of joyful, fast wagging tail, loving moments, and wet kisses No one can miss and love us as much as he. 3/15/2023 Beloved Pets Poetry Contest Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 3/27/2023 11:01:00 AM
A true portrait of a typical terrier - no matter the size! Terrier people are very special in our estimation! Paddy is our fourth terrier and we love the energy and the distinct terrier personality! And, yes, do they have a mind of their own! At this moment Paddy is checking in! Congratulations on your win Eve! Blessings!
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Date: 3/27/2023 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day/week writing away....................
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Date: 3/27/2023 12:16:00 AM
Thank you for entering this poetry contest Eve, and congratulations on your 1st place win! :)
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Date: 3/16/2023 10:47:00 AM
A beautiful write on your beloved pet, Eve, best wishes
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Date: 3/16/2023 10:03:00 AM
Enjoyed your lovely poem picturing your sweet "porky", Dear Eve. Pets bring endless joy and happiness with their cute gestures, and delightful company.
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Date: 3/16/2023 2:58:00 AM
I am well acquainted with Peanuts. A lovable dog. Hugs
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Date: 3/16/2023 1:20:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Date: 3/15/2023 9:14:00 PM
OMG, just melt my heart. If only you can see my cat, he’s bigger than your porky. He’s my piggy. Lol. Eve, I certainly enjoyed your delightful poem. :)
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