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Peanut is 14 years old

My Beloved Pet

Peanut a silvery bluey, pale blond,  long hair Yorkie 
Short waggy tail, floppy ears, brandy brown eyes 
That melts your heart with his elegance.

He was supposed to be a petite five pounds 
Pup, but by the age of five he became a porky.
I was told Mother Nature is full of surprises. 

He has a mind of his own, “Stubborn,” true to his nature.
On our walks in the morn,  if he’s done, he’s done. 
He sits in the middle of the road and won’t budge; he’s won.

He’ll nip at my toes to let me know his done.
It’s embarrassing. I pick him up and carry him home.
When we get close, I put him down, to the front door he runs.

He loves a delightful back massage or a good belly rub
Or the back of his ears scratched.  He doesn’t like the tub,
He knows what comes next, and don’t leave him alone. 

He's a part of the family that has won our heart with tons
Of joyful, fast wagging tail, loving moments, and  wet kisses 
No one can miss and love us as much as he.

3/15/2023

Beloved Pets Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 11:01 AM
A true portrait of a typical terrier - no matter the size! Terrier people are very special in our estimation! Paddy is our fourth terrier and we love the energy and the distinct terrier personality! And, yes, do they have a mind of their own! At this moment Paddy is checking in! Congratulations on your win Eve! Blessings!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 8:54 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day/week writing away....................
May Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 10:47 AM
A beautiful write on your beloved pet, Eve, best wishes
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Enjoyed your lovely poem picturing your sweet "porky", Dear Eve. Pets bring endless joy and happiness with their cute gestures, and delightful company.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 2:58 AM
I am well acquainted with Peanuts. A lovable dog. Hugs
Meadows Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 1:20 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Chuuk Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 9:14 PM
OMG, just melt my heart. If only you can see my cat, he’s bigger than your porky. He’s my piggy. Lol. Eve, I certainly enjoyed your delightful poem. :)
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