My Beloved

Inside such dreams of never lasting days We traversed such wanting thoughts in emotional astray On that December night, to our cottage on the hill Where on many a moonlit walk, we allowed our thoughts to spill Our footprints of life we took in threaded tread we walked When one was about to talk, in confusion abound, we baulked Snowflakes we often talked about, turned to emotional rain Drowning your wisps of auburn, natures moistness becomes our drain Such memories of our past, where the rains graced your clover And I your beloved, once graced your body over No longer shall I sense your breath so warm against my chest As you delightfully grace my lobes, my internal heart now stressed Your kisses I still feel, their once touch of tender brush Like tumble-weed they now drift, my lips in different crush On warm white sheets we used to lay, we called them our clouds of heaven No longer shall crease, not one day out of seven No longer shall our fingers dance over undulations of we Or will our torso's mingle, like the ivy graces the tree The losing of you is massive, our peripheral declares it a shame Beloved to each other we're not, it's life, no ones to blame..... < Inspired by 'Charmaine Chircop's “Pasionata” > <*>
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Goudreau Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 7:27 PM
A beautiful and poignant read James. I could feel your emotions as I read this. Melancholy and heartfelt. A very moving poem! Excellent my friend!
Fraser Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 5:11 PM
Thank you Suzanne, it's much appreciated reading my poetry, James :)
Lindley Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Just found this jewel my friend. Definitely a 7 rating and a pleasure to have read this fine morn..
Fraser Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 5:42 PM
Written whilst reading a few words by Charmaine, then Boom, written soon. Thanks kindly for the visit Robert, James :)
Belle Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 9:30 AM
Awww... emotional. Snifff... Very powerful! Bravo! LoveLots, Ara
Fraser Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 3:17 PM
Many thanks Arabelle for gracing my humble poems, very much appreciated, James :)
Susan Avatar
July 13, 2013 at 11:29 PM
such a wonderful poem.I just love it.keep goin James
Lamoureux Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 6:55 AM
You have skills my friend. I am glad you entered my contest so that I was introduced to your work.
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 3:22 PM
such a melancholy poem but so touching and lovely, James. Nice seeing you here today!
Babcock Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 11:36 AM
Oh this touches the heart and I feel the emotions in this poem. Happy Easter to you. This poem makes me sad for lost love and all that was. I think it will go into my fav love phyl
Bono Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 7:21 PM
you know how to touch hearts greatly.hope all is well.
Van Breda Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 6:56 AM
Hi James First time I am reading your poetry, and this one is beautiful! I love the way you have combined the beauty of nature with the beauty and emotions of love....lovely !
Goff Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 1:20 PM
yes.....intense....thanks James!
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March 17, 2013 at 1:17 PM
No picture is needed I enjoyed yr poem verse, pros. Ann WI
Richards Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 11:16 AM
So sad, and so beautiful....I feel I have read a classic tragic novel. Wonderful poem, James!
Peranteau Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 6:14 AM
This my dear poet friend, this for true deserves adulation James...(((((claps))))) ! This sir I so enjoyed...though a sad ending, every ride seems to end. Have a wonderful week my friend....much love,james
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March 2, 2013 at 1:13 AM
Wow..Im so overwhelmed..my humble verse inspired such a beauty.I was missing your romantic poetry James.I do miss those good old days when you carolyn nikko raul.james and many talented poets used to.be so.frequent here.Hope you are fine..and this gem.goes tmfvs..Charmaine
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