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Hours with you persistent in my deep heart until I feel my life ebbing away If cycle of time stops revolution die peacefully swapping thoughts in thy eyes Photo: 1 Double Tetractys 8 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper A Double Tetractys written as: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 Date: 20-08-2021. Place : 1st

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Date: 9/14/2021 11:07:00 AM
So delicate and wistfully romantic like the subtle passing of time Patri. Congratulations for your win.
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Date: 9/25/2021 9:21:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Date: 9/9/2021 6:12:00 PM
Patri, congratulations on your win. Your verse had great imagery, flow, and a split for the second stanza. Hugs Eve
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/25/2021 9:21:00 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Date: 8/20/2021 1:42:00 PM
Patri, beautifully penned, I like your poem a lot, best of luck in the contest ~ Constance
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 8/20/2021 10:29:00 PM
Glad to receive your compliments. Thanks a lot for the encouragement.

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