My Being

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body, soul, spirit*: my being’s trinity --- void without triune God. *1Thessalonians 5:23 And the very God of peace sanctify you wholly; and I pray God your whole spirit and soul and body be preserved blameless unto the coming of our Lord Jesus Christ. November 13, 2020 Honorable Mention, "MON-O" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 11/14/2020.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/22/2020 1:45:00 PM

Beata, your poem is filled with spiritual beauty. The trinity is well represented in this lovely piece. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian’s contest.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2020 2:11:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Beata :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Alkas Poetry

Date: 11/16/2020 2:05:00 AM

so it is, so be it! spiritual. Congrats alkas

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2020 3:22:00 PM

wonderfully spiritual, Beata. Congrats on the win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2020 1:46:00 PM

Good scripture reference to use for this one. Congrats on your winner. Sara

John Watt

Date: 11/14/2020 6:08:00 PM

Being created in God's image, it makes sense that there would be a human representation of His trinity. Yet we are void without him. Lovely thoughts, Beata. Grace and peace ~ John