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My Beautiful Rose

My beautiful rose here all aglow
the sun rays hits your soft pale skin,
you come alive in your many beautiful shades of pink.
As I write my love for you in a love letter
you will read just how I feel for you,
I will let my pen write loving words flowing with loving ink.
I impatiently wait for your loving words to be sent to me
I really need a note or letter this day,
by snail mail or by e-mail.
My heart belongs only to you my love
here I wait for your reply both day and night,
as I lose sleep and cry tears for you in my pail.
Your beauty takes my breath away
there are no words I can speak,
as you sit here next to me.
I do not know what to do or what to say
my thoughts are running in my head
I just know it was meant to be.
As I breathe I love you oh so much more
the sun rises and sets with you my love,
as my heart of love I have to give.
One kiss, two kisses, then three kisses more
somehow I need to say I am sorry,
I feel like a lion that needs to forgive.
Date Written: 7/21/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/4/2019 7:40:00 PM
sweet as a lovely rose, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/5/2019 2:13:00 PM
Thanks for reading & writing to me. It is always great to hear from other writers.
Date: 8/1/2019 10:07:00 PM
The rose... beautifully written. My heart is sad, unloved lion. Excellent write. Ann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/5/2019 2:12:00 PM
Thanks for your note & for writing. The rose is the skin of the lady. The one he loves. The lion is the man.

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