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My Bathroom Mirror

My bathroom mirror amplifies tired eyes and lines of discontent a harsh reminder of the unfairness of life and forces me to stare in the face the cards I have been dealt but cannot change I am not vain, but the bathroom mirror believes that I am, prodding my esteem with it's taunting illusion of superficial desires and making me sick with longing for all the things I do not have Frowns furrow into my brow and once carefree features twist with violent acknowledgement that I cannot go back and undo the undone the bathroom mirror plays tricks on us all waiting for those quiet moments when we doubt ourselves and resolve to change who we are entirely But we would not have got this far in life without being ourselves and the bathroom mirror is a terror that reflects back regret and long lost dreams failures and good times lost the bathroom mirror amplifies tired eyes and lines of discontent a harsh reminder of the unfairness of life and that's why I rarely look at it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/26/2016 11:15:00 PM
LISA, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 4/28/2011 4:47:00 AM
I hear ya I don't like the mirror either .. nice write.cory
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Date: 2/8/2011 5:20:00 AM
I don't as a rule get on with free verse very well, but I really enjoyed this piece, you've got some very nice vocabulary in here. I love "taunting illusion of superficial desires". Very nice poem.
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:59:00 AM
I love this Lisa! However others often see what we don't. lol I will add this to my favs. list. You are very talented! Welcome to Poetry Soup and I hope you'll like it here. Thanks for the kind comments. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/31/2011 12:09:00 AM
So sad Lisa, yet i love what you write, there is so much beauty in your pen, one knows it comes straight from your heart. Harry
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Date: 1/30/2011 6:22:00 AM
Its not the reflection, its what in the eyes my dear... just my thoughts....always Michael
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Date: 1/30/2011 4:41:00 AM
Great descriptiveness in this entry. Many people feel the same way you do when they look in the mirror.
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Date: 1/30/2011 4:22:00 AM
Hate to even look into the mirror at times. It never lies, excellent write.
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