My Aunt With Her Red Car

Out of the blue she comes
always uninvited
sometimes too early
sometimes too late
sometimes she stays
away for months…

That tend to have us females
perplexed
because sometimes
it's better to have 
her uninvited
then to not have her around…

Her staying away
can mean a few things
the ultimate sign 
That there is a baby
on the way.

She is preceded by moods
that turns a pretty, 
agreeable, “yes sir lady”
Into a question asking, 
one minute crying, 
the next minute laughing
individual…

Someone who does not
understand herself, 
who just want to be held
and reminded that they are loved
and that everything will fall into place
once my aunt with her red car 
arrives and restores the calm…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 6:08 PM
Hey, thanks for the soupmail. let me tell you why I never got this one. 1, my aunt with red car was always on time (well until she died and quit comin at all. haha). 2) I never experienced mood swings whatsoever. But I agree with ya, it's always better to have her coming whether invited or not!!! and sorry I didn't get this on my own!! I even did this myself and got the same reactions from people who read it. i will have to put my "swan song" up sometime! LUv, Andrea
Fone Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 8:06 AM
Oh Wilma!, how very clever of you, of course I got this straight away, being a woman whose "aunt" has just passed away, if you know what I mean! haha, brilliant piece though, as ever. June xx
K. Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 3:47 AM
haha was about to go when I read your comment ;) --yup you got me good with this ;p & I think others too :) ok really gotta go! my tummy's complaining now ;)
K. Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 3:09 AM
oh my goodness, hahaha NOW I get it, hitting myself on the forehead now--very very clever, Wilma--sure escaped me the first time--thanks for the tip (haha more like answer)--I did wonder about that baby part...haha you sure got me with this one! ;)
K. Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 2:07 AM
A very unique topic I must say, what a very intriguing aunt! --nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 7:52 PM
Oh, how cool to have an aunt like this with her red car!! Was this for the "warm embrace" contest? It reminded me of something that would fit that category. I enjoyed reading this. Luv, Andrea
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June 8, 2010 at 7:51 PM
Lol what a funny write, enjoyed this one..p.d.
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