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My Attic Treasure Trove

26/2/2012 By Sashi Prabhu (zeauoxian) Contest: treasure trove
Austerely laid my eyes firmly on my garden far side Tattered page piles, from my attic treasure trove, littered outside. I picked up a dog eared page of the days of sitting together, In this garden, cuddling and smooching in cold weather. On such a glorious winter day, I scribbled on this page love notes, A long time ago, by the way, in double quotes Nostalgic now the dismal, Melancholy tenors that fill in, Memories of “au revoir”, replete my poignant heart to its brim. A wind now blows this dog eared page & it flies by the old gum tree Dully chase it with some rage &as I see the page, begin to read all about me…………….. For the last two lines, the paper is vacant void & bare, Heart’s healed wounds to open with quinine drenched text I would not dare.

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Date: 3/15/2012 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Treasure Trove" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2012 12:07:00 PM
thank you Carol for the wishes.......~sashi
Date: 3/14/2012 8:22:00 PM
It's nice seeing some of the winners, how their treasure trove was related to writing and/or to poetry. VERY nice. Big congratulations.
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:32:00 AM
thanks for the wishes Andrea........~sashi
Date: 3/14/2012 3:47:00 PM
I hope you found all of the pages Sashi. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:33:00 AM
lol.........yes i did find most of them Joyce....and boy they were simply reflective.~sashi
Date: 3/14/2012 9:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win, sashi. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:34:00 AM
thank you Ralph....~sashi
Date: 3/14/2012 4:02:00 AM
Send you a congrats for your win. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:35:00 AM
thank you very much Anne.....~sashi
Date: 3/13/2012 8:50:00 PM
congrats Sashi on sweet win for dynamic words luv.. thankxx for supporting too..
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/15/2012 9:36:00 AM
thank you Linda.......~sashi
Date: 2/27/2012 9:10:00 AM
what a lovely couplet. I love this very much. thank you for visiting my poetry and your lovely comments I duelly appreciate.
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/27/2012 9:12:00 AM
thanks Lisa........~sashi
Date: 2/26/2012 7:25:00 PM
Every line is poignant, Sashi...well-written and heartfelt. I hope to see it at the top of the winner list. Blessings, Rhonda
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/27/2012 7:53:00 AM
thanks a million for the wishes Rhonda...~sashi
Date: 2/26/2012 10:04:00 AM
i like the silent, languid aspect of this,sash... a thoroughly enjoyable read with my winning huggs! :)
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/27/2012 7:54:00 AM
thanks Nette....~sashi
Date: 2/26/2012 9:00:00 AM
What a joy to read this one, sashi,..no doubt, superb in its poetics, jag
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/26/2012 9:02:00 AM
thanks a millionfor the warm words..Jag....~sashi
Date: 2/26/2012 8:28:00 AM
Well written piece on a subject we all share.... Michael
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/26/2012 8:32:00 AM
thank you Michael...~sashi

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