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My Atomic Lover

My atomic lover, chemically induces me. Transforms me into substances and breaks, Down, my anatomy. He starts with my mind, as complex as it may be Changes my compound structure, my neurons To transmitters, stop functioning naturally I no longer can process, the capability to reason freely. He interrupts my thought pattern, and emotionally challenges me. After the mind is stimulated, he advances to my heart A vital organ, made up of 4 chambers, this is the crucial part My heart cannot transfer, what the mind is telling me It races out of control, in all urgencies. All my senses then awaken, with one single touch My vital signs, are compromised, as a passionate persuasion erupts My heart skips a beat, at the thought of his loving ways So pacient kind, and understanding, never ceases to amaze An ignition starts, that revives the heart. I can never give enough praise My atomic lover, I will love you till my, departing days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/30/2013 1:12:00 PM
The Transformer! Great work, Cherie!
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Date: 8/30/2013 11:49:00 PM
Appreciate your comment Gerald, many thanks:0) cherie

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