My All

Thinking of the foundations we had laid
   But between us as always a brick wall
   These memories that never do fade
    Even now finding it hard to stand tall

    Though she often liked to masquerade
    As if everything to her was just some ball
     There is me trying to keep up the facade
     Even at times when the curtain dose fall

    Perhaps once again l was being played
    As often seemed l'm at her beck and call
     But then hay what a silly mistake l'd made
     To think l gave her my heart ,my soul ,my all

Written early 2002 about exgilfriend perhaps 
devious was her name caught in her web of decit
Now gone worlds apart though one of a kind those times
Some of them divine...

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Date: 6/17/2021 4:19:00 AM
We live we learn... Masks eventually must be lifted...the curtain must close...reality must hit. Love this one. Always, Laura
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Date: 6/12/2021 11:38:00 AM
david, This poem rings true in past days. 'Now gone worlds apart though one of a kind those times ~~ Some of them divine...' Curious that title 'My AlL'.., it means much to you I suppose. -Richard
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Date: 6/12/2021 9:04:00 PM
Yes perhaps you cant give your heart untill you recive someone elses ppems gone ,one of a kind , divine , everlasting,love is rare and others manily diffrent aspects of relationship that meant more to me than her but then my first rwak relationship l made the mistake of thinking she could fix me but then there were sides of her l mentiend in web of deciet,devious her name,ect where she was not all peaches and cream xx
Date: 6/11/2021 4:31:00 AM
Some lessons we must learn the hard way and then again some we never learn. I am certain many can relate to this one, Scott. I know I certainly can.
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David Scott
Date: 6/11/2021 11:28:00 PM
Maybe rushing into quick glad others can relate my intension when l write for others too perhaps lm from diffrent age love seems out of fashion thankyou for your kind coments #/:^')-
Date: 6/10/2021 7:57:00 PM
They have a way of luring us in, I guess, David. We gotta be on our guard, methinks. :) gw
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David Scott
Date: 6/11/2021 11:24:00 PM
Yeah it feels like once bittern now three times shy maybe just giving my heart to the wrong person the whole love thing lve gave up on dont think exists anymore thank you for your kind words #/;"^()-
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