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My Addiction

I picked forbidden fruit from the tree And then tasted the sweet , ripe flesh Now prisoner to the taste I long for more and more Drowning in my need Addicted to Strawberry Ice cream Cones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 6/4/2014 3:17:00 PM
A GOOD, another one on food!! I like my onions better , but strawberries is a great fruit to do your nonet on!!
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Date: 6/3/2014 11:35:00 AM
Great, Barbara. A good addiction to have...maybe, depends on how many of those cones it takes to scratch the itch.
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Date: 6/3/2014 1:58:00 AM
Lovely and desirable addiction, Barbara
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Date: 6/2/2014 2:51:00 PM
This is wonderful BG ...Freddy asked for it to be centered...good luck Tim
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/2/2014 6:35:00 PM
Thanks Tim, so many rules! lol.
Date: 6/2/2014 8:22:00 AM
Mmmm delicious poem:-) good luck in the contest. Hus Jan xx
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