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Thousands of breaths I withdrew from my life’s account today; balance unknown! 





 

© Demetrios Trifiatis
    06 February 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

February 6, 2016 at 7:28 PM

wow, I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS.

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 7, 2016 at 2:31 AM

I lovE, loVE, LOVE, your comment! Thank you dearest Andrea!

Eve Roper

February 6, 2016 at 5:30 PM

This I understand :) Hugs Eve

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 7, 2016 at 2:29 AM

Happy you do, dear Eve! Thank you!

Bl Devnath

February 6, 2016 at 2:49 PM

God keeps everybody's account, He knows only how much is left to breathe. Beautiful monoku. Insightful. (7). Loved always,bl

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 7, 2016 at 2:28 AM

GOD IS WISE my friend, BL! Thank you so much!

Gergana Videnova

February 6, 2016 at 7:46 AM

Amazing ....I would say .... the best account ever...love it xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 6, 2016 at 7:51 AM

Welcome my new friend, I am delighted with your visit and heartfelt comment! Hope you will stay with us forever and share your lovely poetry with us. Thank you dear Gergana for your gracious comment!

Scott Thirtyseven

February 6, 2016 at 7:00 AM

Another gem.

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 6, 2016 at 7:10 AM

You so kind! Thank you my friend, Scott!

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 6, 2016 at 6:34 AM

- Thoughts on the paper, which is to think of dear friend - Enjoy each day as it comes ..... no one has guarantees - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 6, 2016 at 7:12 AM

No guarantees asked, my dear Anne-Lise! Not from me anyway. I just follow HIS lead! Thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment!

Elaine George

February 6, 2016 at 6:14 AM

BRILLIANT Monoku, dear Demetrois

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 6, 2016 at 7:13 AM

Happy you like it, dear Elaine! Thank you very much!

Kp Nunez

February 6, 2016 at 3:25 AM

I love this. I love looking at life through your wise eyes. May you live long, sire.

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 6, 2016 at 4:34 AM

Always a pleasure to see your comments, dear Kim! I do appreciate your visits. God bless you! Thank you so much!

Poet Destroyer A

February 6, 2016 at 3:13 AM

Hi Demetrios, WOW, that's a good and clever monoku. Hope the balance left is more than you imagined. Life is Long... linda

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 6, 2016 at 4:33 AM

What a delightful surprise! Yes, dear PD, life may be long to make us unhappy but certainly too short to make us happy! Now, about our balance, only God knows and this is better for everyone. To live long, dear Linda, it doesn't worth while unless we stay healthy: Physically, mentally and morally! Thank you so much for taking the time to visit and comment in such a lovely way!

Lydia Chitra Jacob

February 6, 2016 at 2:56 AM

Truth written nicely

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 6, 2016 at 4:29 AM

Welcome my new friend! Welcome to our poetic family where you will find a lot of good people you could exchange ideas and comments! Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment!

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