My Hamburger On a Bun

When I have a hamburger on a bun
The toppings for me are different
Forget the lettuce and tomato
That is not my choice

Instead my bun is decorated in my own way
First comes the bun, then the burger
Along with two slabs of cheddar cheese
This is my favourite way to start

It's not always number one with me
Sometimes I will have relish
Makes the burger taste great
They are a good combo together

My taste buds hve now discovered
Another topping I enjoy
It is wine sauerkraut
Second choice to the cheese

I enjoy all of these condiments
Upon my burgerit is a treat
Dressed in several different ways
Oh boy! What a delight
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Date: 11/2/2017 10:05:00 AM
Wonderfully delicious write, Darlene. Love everything except the sauerkraut. Two things gets me physically ill when I smell them ... sauerkraut and sweet-and-sour sauce. Glad you can deal w/it. Love this burger delight poem. Love and peace forever.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/2/2017 10:27:00 AM
Hello Freddie, you do not have to have sauerkraut or sweet and sour sauce. Just have it the way you like it. Have a nice day my friend.Peace and love Always.
Date: 8/2/2017 9:52:00 AM
A hamburger is so good. All the ways you like it are my favorites too.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2017 1:44:00 PM
Ah! I could go for one right now.With cheese and bacon, and fries.You like them the same way i do. I also like it with cheese and relish. have a great day my friend.
Date: 7/31/2017 1:18:00 PM
- Oh ... sorry ... I took the dessert first (the watermelon :)) - You make me hungry, Darlene :) - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/1/2017 8:56:00 AM
Are you having a burger? Or watermelon? Hugs my griend have a nice day.
Date: 7/31/2017 9:57:00 AM
I am really addicted to burgers at the moment!!! I've had three in the last 5 days! That is not a very good idea, and I really need to stop! Your poem made me smile and is well written..
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2017 12:01:00 PM
Hello my friend,I have a burger when I eat out and my topping is cheese. Once in awhile I will have other toppings. Have a good day my friend. I am pleased I made you smile.
Date: 7/30/2017 11:53:00 PM
Excellent. Enjoyed reading it. Yes, food for thought. Thanks for sharing it.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2017 9:42:00 AM
I am so glad that you enjoyed my poetry. Have a nice day.
Date: 7/30/2017 8:13:00 PM
food for thought ;) Light & Love
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2017 12:06:00 PM
Debbie nice to meet you. Yes food for thought. I like my burger with cheese, sometimes with other toppings. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/30/2017 7:04:00 PM
Such a fun poem , Darlene. It certainly made me want a burger. Great with the cheese on it, yes :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2017 12:26:00 PM
i love burgers with cheese and bacon the more bacon the better Have a great day my friend.
Date: 7/30/2017 6:56:00 PM
You're talking straight to my heart, especially with the relish and cheese... a little bacon will do the trick...Thanks for sharing...I'm going to the kitchen...Good night
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2017 12:28:00 PM
Hello Arturo,I have never tried relish and cheese, I will next time I have a burger. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/30/2017 6:43:00 PM
what a tasty poem in so many ways Darlene:-) I'm ok with the cheese and relish but no no no to sauerkraut that needs to be with mashed potato and smoked ring sausage lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/31/2017 12:43:00 PM
I will try mashed potato and smoked sausage. Have a nice day my friend.
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